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#1

I will read the first chapters of your stories and give you feedback (things you done well or things you should improve on) you will be given a mark out of 10 for each category except my overall opinion which will be out of 40

you will be judged on:

DIRECTING

GRAMMAR

DEVELOPMENT OF THE STORY

MY OVERALL OPINION


#2

Hey there! Thank you so much.

Title: Camouflaged Intentions
Author: Damini A.
Genre: Mystery/Drama
Description: Stella has led a very unoriginal life until now–when a party, a gun, and a loaded question make everything go crazy.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4546981313118208

:slight_smile:


#3

Hey, I would be glad if you could check out my story! :slight_smile:

Title: LOST IN YOU
Author: idieinyouarms
Genre: Romance
Description: When Juliette ends up heartbroken, she knows she has to make a change and stop playing safe. But will she be able to take a risk or get lost on the way to breaking all the rules?

Thank you so much in advance! :slight_smile: :heart::star2:
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5328161000390656


#4

Hi! Hope you would notice me. :sweat_smile::sweat_smile: hope you can review mine. Thanks a lot!

I have published my story. i assure you that it is not a common girl drama wolf vampire drama. i hope you will find time to read my story. :slight_smile: thanks! I assure you the story gets better. 6 episodes uploaded already
P.S. it is not really all wolves and vampires there’s more to it so stay tuned
Story: Unexpected You
Genre: Romance/Action/Fantasy
Author: Haneen
Teaser: A girl who thought her junior year would be normal as she expected to be. It turns out there are a lot of unexpected events happening in her life. Will she survive? Who is her man?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5037126225231872


#5

Title: The College Diaries
Author: A.V.
Genre: Drama (-Romance)
Style: INK
Description: Love, friends, drama; everything finally seems better.
Will you let your haunting past take control of your life? [CC], 4 Love Interests, choices matter.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4955169177206784

Thank you for your time :slight_smile:


#6

Hi! I’d love to hear your thoughts on my story:

Title: Hearts Reunited
Author: Akasha Seavue
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description: When a shadow from the past comes back into her life, will two hearts reunite or will his secrets destroy her life?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5170974459297792

Thank you for doing this!


#7

Hey everyone, I just wrote a story and I’m hoping for you guys to give it a read.
I only published 5 episodes but I will publish more in a few days.
Here are the details for it:
Title: SHANKED!
Author: feck.b
Category: action/adventure
Description: She runs in tears, bumping into a “school friend” stabbing someone. Forced to join in a British gang,What Will Haunt Her Now?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5563581969596416Story
covers:



This story also uses East London slang.


#8

I will check out all of these


#9

im familiar with east London slang


#10

Hi everyone! This is my first contest piece entry. I hope you enjoy the read!

Title: H & V : In Too Deep
Author: Sweet Stories
Genre: Romance, Mystery, Fantasy
Summary: You move to Miami to start your new life, but you get into some trouble that makes you cross paths with a mysterious stranger. Is he the hero you think he is?


#11

Hey! I would love your review :blush:

Title: ONE-WAY TICKET FOR U
Author: Cribb
Genre: Drama
Description: Cleo’s life changes right before her departure for Spain. Will this holiday help her to forget, or everything will get worse?
No one can be trusted.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5288765660987392

Thank you :heart:


#12

Hi @_hxxd! If you want, can you please review my story: Shape Shifting Madness? It’s a comedy, and I’ll give you a tiny description. It’s about the life of a twenty one year old woman who pranks people, has funny romantic moments, and just tries to have fun. That’s all. :slightly_smiling_face:
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6006937021972480


#13

Title: Filling a void
Author: Amber Thompson
Link is down below

Thanks for this opportunity.


#14

Heyo! I have just released my first EPISODE story!

Could you check it out? It’s for the H & V contest.

Cheers,
R.


#15

Hello there! I will be very happy if you check out my story <3

Tittle: Dear Past
Author: Helmion
Genre: Mystery/comedy/drama
Description: Joseline is a girl who suffered in her childhood because of her father’s guilt, will she manage to overcome the pain or will she continue to suffer.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4622610543017984
Thanks you soo much for your time :relaxed:


Instagram: @episode_helmion


#16

Thank you !

Title: Serendipity
Author: krissy_k
Genre: Fantasy
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5307481307348992


#17

Can you read mine? It’s my first story!!

Title: Royal or Hunter
Author: Eden Myers
Genre: Action
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6550488063016960

THANK YOU


#18

I would be happy if you read my story :blush:

TITLE: The Exchange Student
STYLE: Limelight
DESCRIPTION: You’re an exchange student but what happens if your host family is the most popular and richest family in town?
AUTHOR: triblue


#19

Hey everyone!

First of all, thank you so much for doing this! It’s amazing!

Below you can find the information of my story. :kissing_heart:

Author: Alphan
Story Title: Upside Down
Genre: Romance, Drama, Mystery
Style: INK
Story Description: June escaped her previous life. Will she meet people who will love her or will her old enemies destroy her again?
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6390501417418752
Instagram: alphan.episode

Please make sure to follow me on Instagram to contact me or for sneak peeks of the story!

I’m up for read for reads as well, contact me on Instagram for that, please! :wink:

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#20

Title:Sing with me
Genre:Drama
Author: Ani & Abi
Description:Tragedy . Can a wounded lover be able to move on and find peace or will everything fade away like the foam of the salted sea?
Published: Yes it is published
NUmber of episodes: 6
Somehting fun why you wrote the story: I wrote the story to try writing stories, for fun, because I like writing. Mostly to give important messages.
Cover:night

Link to my story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5232918662348800