I'm having trouble writing and directing horror and I need feedback

I had an idea for horror and I just wrote an intro scene and it’s very short but I just need someone to tell me what they think and give me some tips on how to make it better.

bump.

I still need help. Just tell me what you think of it so far and if it’s scary?

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