I'm In need of a proofreader for my story

Hi, I need a proofreader for my story ,
here is the link if you are interested http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4826404140941312
Could you leave me some feedback on it please :blush: Thank you

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Hey my many suggestions are to put a period at the end of every sentence, make sure the characters are layered properly (I saw some errors in this), and maybe use grammarly to check over your text for any errors! Overall I think your story has potential💕


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Thank you so much for the feedback I appreciate it

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Np! Glad I could help!

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