I'm looking for feedback on my story, Sirena!

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About: Sirena is a fire fey princess, tradition would dictate she marry the new fire king, her parents want her to marry the prince of water and ice fey to strengthen the ties between the kingdoms, and she wants to experience love without obligations. Who will she end up with, and who will she dissapoint?

This is my first time ever making an episode and I’m looking for feedback on it!
There’s only one “episode” so far, but it is a tad bit long!