I am super new to the Episode Forum and am so excited to be a part of it! I’ve been looking through the comments and questions on here, and I’m punching myself because this would’ve helped me years ago. I’ve been working on a story since 2015, because I’ve kept redoing and undoing it! I’m a perfectionist lol. I would love for you guys to give me a chance and read it, because I’ve spent years working on it! If you decide to read it, thank you so much! This means so so much to me:) Please also feel free to share your stories as well, I need a good read:) I hope everyone is having a great day!
Title: Because of Blossom Creek
Author: Lily Brinkley
Description: Julia and her best friends are living up their last view months at home before they head off to college and along the way they face many living-chaniging obstacles. Love, mistakes, and more mistakes lol!
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congrats on publishing! i’ll try to take a look at your story but here’s mine to promote
Thank you for this thread
Author : Simi.a
Title : Apply pressure
Genre : Drama
Style : limelight
Instagram : simia.stories
Description : A strong-willed engineer. A billionaire CEO. They’re both fighting for what they can’t have. Can they beat the odds stacked against them? or will the pressure crush them both?
Hey I just read your first chapter of your story and I want to give you some feedback.
You should work more on the speech bubble placement, spot directing, and zooming.
The mother looked like the MC’s sister IMO, all was changed was her hair style and lip color, eye color, and eyebrows, I’d recommend you changing something like maybe her hairstyle or face shape to make her look more mother like instead of a 19 year old sister lol.
The brother walked in then ended up as idle after he walked by. If you wanted him to walk and do an animation right after he came in, you can do it like @CHARACTER walks to spot x y z in S AND CHARACTER faces left/right then CHARACTER is animation AND CHARACTER faces left/right
@CHARACTER walks to spot x y z in S AND CHARACTER does it while animation AND CHARACTER faces left/right then CHARACTER is animation AND CHARACTER faces left/right
&CHARACTER walks to spot x y z in S AND CHARACTER does it while animation AND CHARACTER faces left/right then CHARACTER is animation AND CHARACTER faces left/right
&CHARACTER walks to spot x y z in S AND CHARACTER faces left/right then CHARACTER is animation AND CHARACTER faces left/right
When the mom said “What am I going to do with these kids?”, you could’ve made that into an thought bubble.
When the character did the shush and sometimes flirt point wink animation, I saw her finger a little so you should spot direct her farther out the scene or make a clone of her doing the animation and do it that way.
The MC’s bf could of had more dialog and more personality in him instead of just being rude for a few minutes.
You should add more features to the background characters as some of them just looked random and not done at all. That can be pretty annoying.
I believe one of the background characters was layer incorrectly when they first walked in the part scene.
At the party scene when one of the girls was cussing while dancing, I’m pretty sure that cuss words are limited 5 per scene also, you forgot to censor some of the cuss words.
And I think that’s about it… . Imma read the rest of the chapters and will prob pm (if that’s okay with you) to let you know what you should change and give you some more suggestions.
Congrats on publishing your story Btw, this is my story. Hope you can read it and of course I’ll give your story a read
THIS IS MY STORY
Author: Ava. S
Title: Love, Hate
Story Genre: Comedy And Romance
Chapters: 9 (more chapters coming soon)
Story Style: Limelight
Gem Choice: Start from chapter 5
Liam Johnson is a famous boy band leader. Because of an “accident.” , he switches bodies with a GIRL?!?!?! Is this an arrangement of fate? Will they fall in love with each other?
Thank you so much woah. I haven’t edited the first chapter in a long time but thank you so much for the suggestions. I will fix those now:)
I hope you are fine.
Thanks for the promotion !
Below my link, I hope you will enjoy it
Title E L I T E
Author Name Iah Miko
Description How will you do when your duty will go against your principles ? Who will you save first ? / Comment feras-tu lorsque ton devoir s’opposera à tes principes ? Qui sauveras-tu en premier ?
The first 4 episodes are on the app! I’m a french author so I publish my story both in english as in french. Enjoy
Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!
this is my story.
Coffee shop girl
Grace is your typical girl next door. She is sweet, gorgeous, and everything Spencer dreams of. One problem, She is unavailable… Or is she?
It is a romcom with a male MC.
Hi, thank you for this thread. If this interests anyone ;
Title: The Day I Drowned
Description: Everything about him was grey, like the smoke he exhaled. His hair, his eyes, his smoke,
his anger, his aptitude, his dreams.
There are alot of main themes about relationships, family, loss, life, death, the transition to adulthood.
thanks for the thread! this is my friend’s story your story looks so interesting, i can’t wait to check it out as well
Title: Sincerely, Yasmine
Author name: Abigail
Description: You and your sister were always inseparable, but after her disappearance, you realize you knew nothing about her. 10 years later you’re faced with puzzles, leading to the truth.
- 2 LI’s
- advanced directing
- point system
you should totally check it out if you like a good mystery!! don’t forget to follow her instagram @abigailxwrites for updates and sneak peeks
Thank you for the thread
TITLE: Our little secret
DESCRIPTION: What could be better than meeting five close friends at a student party? Such events are extremely rare. However, things don’t get so rosy when a dead girl is found in the house. Who is behind this and what is the little secret of each of them?
•Sounds & Music
•Point System, Choices matter, Mini games
My ig: @epi.ksu
Hiii My name is Achu (Ok that not my name but who cares)
Ok so I am writing my first story and need some
reviews, advice etc.
SO here it is
Author Name : Achu
Story Description : Anchal is a feared assassin on earth.
Due to an accident, she teleported to another world.
And now she is trying to find herself and the lost princess within all this craziness
Genre : Fantasy
**The title **: The lost princess
I know the cover is not that good I drew it myself
Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!
I really hope you like it and go a little easy on me I am a little new
**Name:**Psychopathic |9 out now|
Here is description
Sometimes we do bad things for people we love. But keep in mind I would never do anything to hurt you… Well that’s what I think
Some spoilers/sneakpeaks/ or whatever you call it lol
Link to my story! Would love to hear positive feedback!
Welcome to the forums and congratulations on publishing
Thank you for this thread love
Title: The Fixer
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5771622302416896
Description: Power, money and influence. This successful Hollywood fixer has the perfect life. But when someone from her past comes back for a favor, everything is about to change.
Extras: Full CC for MC and LIs + 2 LIs + Point System + Choices Matter
Thanks for the thread. Dm me for r4r.
Title: Eat Stake
Author: Sinead O’Neill
Your destiny is to protect humanity from a malevolent being, who intends to populate the world with such evil. What happens though, when you fall for his hot but heartless son?
(cc, choices, adv directing, music/sound, mini-games)
Eat Stake link
If anyone could take the time to read mine I would hugely appreciate it!
Story: The Unwanted
15 years since we’ve been deemed useless and deported to Earth. Now, we reunite to solve the supernatural murders and as past becomes present, our mistakes become fatal…
Advanced directing/ overlays etc.
Also up for r4r!
Congratulations and welcome!
Not long ago I published my new fantasy/romance story! Every read and support means a lot to me, so I hope if you find time - you’ll check it out and like it.
You can find me on instagram: @miwrites.epi for sneak peaks, countdowns and everything you need to know about this or my other stories.
CC: limited (eye shaped, color and hair color are not available)
Choices: will be more!
Chapters: 1-8 on going :>
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6602109696540672
Description: When two worlds collide, you don’t have much choice but to follow the rules. Your enemy becomes your shadow. Your love becomes your enemy. And you just wish to be held in the dark.
What would you do if one day you lost everything? And because of that your life changed beyond recognition to the point that the only escape would be to blend into the world that never suited you?
What if you had to face your own demons and let someone you genuinely hate get close to you? Just for your own safety.
What if feelings got out of hand and no one could stop it?
They say that the forbidden fruit tastes the best and that there is nothing better than losing yourself in an emotion so strong that it can destroy everything in its path.
Knowing all this, would you do this again?
Thank you, here is my new story
Title : 10 Preconditions
Genre : Romance (with a lot of drama)
Style : Limelight
Chapters : 5, more coming soon
Description : 10 Preconditions - everything Lola needs to never fall in love…
But what happens when Jonathan enters her life and slowly makes Lola break her own rules?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5467133512450048
CC (MC & LI)
Author : MyEpisodees
Instagram : myepisodees
I really hope you read my story and like it I would appreciate it a lot
Title: Two Of Us
Description: Aubrey thinks she has it all worked out until, a smoking hot architect enters her office and things get far too complicated and tempting.
Customization: Full CC
Number of LI: 1
Genre: Drama, Romance with a hint of comedy
Chapters: 5 and ongoing…I try to update weekly!