I'm trying to figure out which person should die in my story :/


#1

Sooooooo, i can’t figure out who should die in the scene i want to write, who do you think should die the main characters best friend that has been the only one there for her her whole life or The girl that the main character is extremely protective over that she saved when they were younger and in the orphanage?


#2

How are they dying


#3

The main character is kind of like an assassin and she sends one of them depending on who’s gonna die to get closer to a person shes hunting down and one night that person finds out and ends up killing whoever.


#4

The mc should be able to choose who to kill


#5

Okkkk ty


#6

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#7

I think the girl who she saved as it’d be slightly sadder in my opinion and if I were the reader I’d probably choose the same.


#8

Okk


#9

I will thank you


#10