I'm willing to give reviews and read people's stories if they read mine!

Thank you so much for your feedback :heart_eyes::heart:

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I will be reading your story now :grin:

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Thank you so much! Regina is in the second episode :slight_smile:

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Hello! This is my story. I’ll check out your story too for sure.(anyone who read this hmu if you want r4r!)

Title: Lacuna
Author: Diana Dee
Instagram: @dianadee.ep (let’s follow each other! and support each other story!)
Genre: Mystery, Fiction, Drama
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 3 at the moment

Description:

Darkness has come, and it’s up to Anne to solved it. Little did she know, the root is closer than she thinks. She has to sacrifice a lot, including her love ones. (Choices Matter, CC later on future chapter, Relationship Point, Different Ending)

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5521620417445888

Cover:

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I thought your story was also great, I just read the first 3 episodes. Here’s some things that could help you

Sometimes the characters seem to just pop into existence on the screen which is a little weird so maybe you could fix that

The chapters are a little short but that isn’t that big of a problem

You could use flags in the scene where you asked the player if they took the photo or not

Also in this scene the guy is running in place

That’s all I really found though. Keep it Up! :grin:

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Hi I read your story and it’s good. I liked it. Short chapters but good :ok_hand:

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Thank you so much for this thread! No need to give a review, but thank you for offering :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Story: Adventurous: Time Immune
Genre: Adventure
Summary: When loud-mouth Mikea sets off on a road-trip with YOU, it becomes harder to hide the truth of your origin… oh, and that you are an immortal cyborg.
CC, POC, LGBT, multiple endings
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6566049968685056

Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960

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Your story was amazing! I especially loved the part at the beginning. You had a lot of cool special effects that most stories don’t have. Personally I would shorten your episode, because I like shorter episode, but that’s just my opinion. Great story overall! :blush:

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Hey everyone, I wanted to apologize if I’ve only gotten to some of your stories, or only read 1 chapter. Once I read a little of everyone’s I’ll keep reading others. Thanks for understanding! :sunny:

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Thank youuu Madeline!!!

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Your story is so intriguing and I love the idea of a murder mystery! The clues that you used were really fun for me to play and It’s really unique. The only thing I would change is where the mom keeps talking when she left, you could have her talk and then leave. I thought that your chapter was the perfect length and I loved the cliffhanger, One of my fav stories! :blush:

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Great stories! :blush:

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I would love to do r4r with you :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

My story is:
Title: Equals
Author: Laurales
Description: It’s about a place where everyone is perfect and without feelings or emotions. When someone starts to feel something, they will be send to a hell of a prison or they will die.
Will they change their way to live?
Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 5 (more episodes will be coming soon)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6498008435064832

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I’ve read your story and i like that there are many choices in every episode and i also like that the episodes are not too long. Good job! :sparkling_heart:

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thanks, you’re so sweet :blush:

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wow omg thank you so much! really appreciate it xx i also have read your story’s first chapter. mina’s clothing choice is… interesting :joy:. some feedback for me: if you have problem with coding, check the guides option on the top of your portal. there’s a lot of guides that can makes your story run more smoothly! If i have more time i’ll try to read more. other than that, the plot is interesting. Keep going and great job :two_hearts:

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Thank you so much!

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This is a great story, personally, I find short stories a lot better, so this is great for me. The only things I noticed in your story that you could change are just small coding mistakes, but that’s it :blush:

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Thanks :heart:
I will fix some mistakes, thanks again :two_hearts:

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Does anyone want to do a r4r?

Title: The lies inside of us
Author: Hannah Voyage
Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight
Description: We all have secrets and sometimes we need to lie to keep them. But what happens when the secrets starts coming out?
Specifics: CC
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5782604699205632

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