I'm willing to review stories


#1

I will only read the first two episodes!

The information I need is:

  • Title
  • Author
  • Style

I will be judging your story on:

  • Plot
  • Grammar
  • Directing

I will let you know if I am going to review your story :slight_smile: You can also write if you prefer me to DM you the final grade, otherwise I will reply publicly on this thread. Thanks!


#2

Me!
Story Title: Mortality
Episode Number: 3 (on going)
Author: Jayda MacGillivray
Story type: INK
Description: In the upbringing of war between different worlds, Kitana is trained to become a warrior for her world. Due to the reveal of truth, will her morals allow her to serve?
Cover:


Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5865348376690688


#4

Hello there, @Zenextria!

Thank you for creating this thread and for reviewing our stories!

Here are the details of mine:

Story Title: Your Secret Admirer
Author: EpisodeCray
Style: Ink
Description: What happens when Natalia’s secret love letter ends up in the hands of the wrong boy? Will she fall in love or will everything fall apart?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4654341800198144

Please let me know what you think about my story through private message. I hope you’ll enjoy it!

Thank you!

X


#5

I just published my first story! A review would be very much appreciated :blush:
I loooved directing it. I felt like a master coder. :computer:
Story: Moments
Author: Sarah Robbins
Genre: Drama (But also some action and romance because ooo girl that’s the good stuff.)
Style: Limelight

Description: Mabel is convinced she’s nothing other than ordinary. Until she discovers her unique power- the ability to control time.

Episodes: 4 (And you best believe there’s more to come :wink:)

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5648062508302336
Instagram: @sarahrobbins.episode
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And silly me, I just realized this would probably work for the Heroes and Villains contest. But I didn’t get all my fun backgrounds and overlays approved in time. Oh :whale:


#6

Here’s my story:
Title: H & V: UnMasked
Author: Courtnaylol
Genre: Action/romance
Description: You either die a hero, or live long enough to see yourself become the villain. Or so they say. Can you change your fate?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5275990590357504
Please DM me if you decide to read my story and thank you in advance.


#7

Title: Mad Love
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Author: Akanksha S.
Style: Ink
Episodes: 9 (ongoing)
Description: One day, you wake up and your mom is gone. Will you be able to find her in time and also true love along the way?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4736906335879168

It’s a story with the perfect combo: romance and mystery. I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me some constructive criticism! Feel free to dm me on Instagram @episode.as.author or private message me here with your thoughts. Thanks :heart:


#8

[DEMON GOD]
Author: E.Z.
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Chapters: 8 (on going)
Instagram: @e.z.episode
Description: He starved himself for three hundred years in order to abide by a woman’s promise. Everyone in Devildom is waiting for him to die.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/46786733136936961

I’d like a DM please : )


#9

Hey! Can you please review my story?

Story title: Blue Orchidea
Author: Ria
Genre: Mystery
Style: Limelight
Story description: Losing my parents because of their mistakes is one thing. Killing my sister is another. They will pay for it!
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5114044461744128

Thank you :smile::hearts:


#10

Hi! :blush: You can still send your review to my insta (@victoria_smith_episode).

This is my story:
Title: Unexpected Love
Author: Victoria_Smith
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Victoria disappointed in love and she completely changed. Is she find love again or she share a bed with strangers?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5217681196580864

Dia1

Thank you! :heavy_heart_exclamation:


#11

Hi, @Zenextria!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. This is my first story ever but I have put a lot of effort in it and would highly appreciate any feedback! I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af


#12

Hi, this is my first story and I hope you guys could give it a read!
Title: SHANKED!
Author: feck.b
Instagram: feck.bx (feck.b is my old account and I have no access to it.)
Category: action/adventure
Description: She runs in tears, bumping into a “school friend” stabbing someone. Forced to join in a British gang,What Will Haunt Her Now?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5563581969596416
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#13

If you’d like, can you review my story?
Title: The Twins
Author: Dasha
Genre: Mystery
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6300814564655104


#14

If you’re still doing reviews, can I request one? If so, can it be DMed to me?

Title: Publicity Problems
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight
Description: Samantha Xanders struggles with her fame after receiving unwanted publicity. Can she overcome the challenges of stardom?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4689222272417792


#15

Thank you for doing this!
Title: H&V: Our Story
Author: Ki_Writes
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4786197070741504


#16

Sure, but it might take me a while because I have some read for reads to do.


#17

Lol, no worries!


#18

That is fair. I think I can handle it.

Here it goes:

Author: Andrew (Drew) Jones
Title: Agents Of SPECTRUM
Style: Ink

The link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5075535578005504

My Instagram is andrewjones.episodes


#19

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I just published a good story called Daddy, and me.

Description: He is an angel, and she is a little girl with a big mouth, when demons hunt them and troubles arise, will they make it together? Read to find out.

Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4663470435467264


#20

Title: Turned
Author: Megha
Style: Romance

description;It’s Andy’s 17th birthday. She gets a birthday gift that will change her life forever…
story type: Lime light
cover:09

If you do review it you can send your review on this thread publicly :slight_smile:


#21

Title:First Love
Author: Chanell
Style: limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6104294055346176

Please DM me