I'm writing life is not a piece of cake

I’m writing life is not a piece of cake. Check it out: https://episode.app.link/H1tLQeR2QS

2 Likes

Ok, your story needed some work.

•Music Or Sound
•The Exits
• When somebody is talking, the character automatically leaves when they are still talking.
•The narration was just the characters talking, and it wasn’t very pleasant.
•The first scene they were just moving around too much.
• You could have explained it a little more.
• The Grammar
•The directing needed some work.

1 Like

Thank you for this thread! <3 I would be willing to do a read for read with you if you’re interested!
Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960