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Suitcases and all

I’ve been a police for over a year now, but I never experienced something like this. I’m sweating, my heart is begging to rip out of my throat and I can’t stop pacing. I feel anxious and can’t stop looking around. Is he here? We need to leave.

After a while I decide to text my brother “I know what you said, but this is code red. Pack your suitcase, or I’ll do it myself”.

My dad was a bad guy that ended in jail. He did very bad things to my brother, my father’s the reason why he lost one eye. I just recently found out that he escaped prision and is coming for us; last night I overhead my boss saying that he had an accomplice, I wonder who that is.

Before I could even move the front door bursted open.

“Quck! Hide!” my brother yells as he entered. “He is here, and won’t stop until he kills us.”

Before he even finished the sentence I grab my gun and pray for the best.

I hear gunshots nearby.

Foosteps.

He is here.

He is scarier than before, he has a huge scar on his face and some new tattoos. But the most important thing is that he has a gun, the best gun that exists. Where did he get it?

He runs towards me, loading his gun. I look around, there is a lamp next to me. He shoots, he hits me in my shoulder. With my other hand I grab the lamp and smash it in his head. As he stumbles back I fire my gun and hit his leg.

He is on the floor, good. I try to kick his head, but he grabs my leg and I loose balance and fall. WHY ISN’T ANYONE HELPING ME?

He gets on top of me and presses his hands to my neck. I can hardly breathe. But all of the sudden he falls to a side and I see my brother. He knocked him out by stabbing him in the back.

“We need to leave” he cried out. “I figured who dad’s accomplice was”

“Who?!” I yell, too shocked to think right.

“Everyone. All the villagers wants us dead”

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