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Title: Caught In Love
Author: TeahWalker323
CC limited, some choices
Details: You’re a cop and just caught a murder. He’s a murder who is bad for your own good. What happens when you both get caught in love?
3 Chapters
Published 09-17-18
Small Cover:

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I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Style: Ink
I published this a few days ago, so it only has 3 episodes



My story name is : Crazy Normal People

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I would love a Review, too :slight_smile: Just tell me what you think :slight_smile:

My Story:
Author: May Laugh
Title: Trouble Twins
Instagram: maylaugh_episode
Genre: Romance (and a little comedy, too.)
Style: Ink
Danger. Passion. Love.
The Laugh-Twins are the complete opposites of what you would call normal. Just let yourself be taken to the world of May and Julien - the Trouble Twins.


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My story: Thriller: Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller
Story style: All the 3 episode characters types: LIMELIGHT, INK & ORIGINAL
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5
Instagram: @jannahjackson

I’ll review your story too. Your story looks interesting! Seen ur post on many threads as well. :slight_smile:


Oooh yay! Loving the inspo!

My story is called Crossed Paths. I have been refining and refining. I wanna see what you think of Derek.

My author name is Dreamer :heartbeat:

Tittle : Search for love
Author : S.writes
Genre: Drama
Episodes:16 ( more coming soon)
Style: Ink
Description: Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation.Can you find the love you’re looking for trying to escape?
Link :
Cover :

I would love a tip or two.
I spent a month learning basic coding and whatnot to make sure it is decent.

Title: Oblivious
Author: The Saminator
Genre: Romance (comedy as well)
Episodes: 3 for now
Style: INK
Description: When shy awkward Leanna starts a new life and takes the interest of equally awkward Kai, things can’t get more awkward, can they?
cover is not updated yet, waiting on approval still but it will look like this:

When I make my new story for the College Days story contest, I’ll have you give it a read before I publish it! :slight_smile:

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Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique:
Genre: drama
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 7
Description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?