Yeah just add readerMessage that would be good 
you’re welcome 
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Perfect!!! I’ll do it!!! Thanks again 
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No problem 
keep up the good work
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Yes I will !!!
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Heyyy! I finished your story and here’s my review :
- I really love the script and the story is well written. I love the lyrics and thank you for mentioning the title of the song as well as the artist! It’s very poetic and I love it!!!
(My fav scene was Tom talking about the definition of Punks) - It’s cool that the choices have an impact in the story, this encourages the reader to participate!
- I found that the story is still good without the Episode music. It’s interesting to read!!
- It was also funny (I tried to flirt with Tom
but it didn’t work and I laughed when Linda said "How cute, it’s like a cheesy Episode story 
) - Be careful with the directing because in Episode 3, the MC wasn’t wearing the clothes that I chose when she came back home after the concert)
- The chapters were a little bit long and maybe you can add more situations with the MC. Also, I want to know more about Jenny because she’s so mysterious lol (like is she a good friend or no? a question that I’m asking myself lol)
That’s all I have to say! It was nice to read it! Hope my review will help you 
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Thanks the episode in which Tom talks about punk, (4) isn’t done yet, I only have 300 lines there and I plan to write about 1700 
and I will look at the concert outfit, I probably misspelled something in the if/elif/else coding and there are going to be more moments with Jenny she is definitely a friend thanks so much I’m glad you liked it anf
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You’re welcome and I’ll wait for the next episodes!!!
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