Hi there, I’m not new to episode but this is a new account, and I’m hoping to get back to writing soon, generally though, I love reading a variety of stories and I am happy to proofread and give reviews of your chapters for free.
Rules
Don’t rush me, I will try to review a minimum of 1 chapter per day but I am doing this for free
There is no need to credit me anywhere or anything, I would just appreciate it if you follow me in episode (Same username as here)
Please fill out the form specifically, thanks.
I will use my points system to grade your chapters, 1 full review per chapter.
For reference I don’t mind whether your story is published or not, it just makes it easier for me to know what kind of level of progress you are in.
Please reply with the form in the comments, if you would rather not have the link be public then feel free to DM me just the link, but make sure you have said you have sent me the link, I don’t want to accidentally lose information in a DM.
How I review
I will grade your chapter based on these things with comments under each.
Directing: (/10)
Involves things like:
Making sure characters look like they are in the right place
Camera movements
Animations that make sense
etc.
Grammar: (/5)
General Grammar/spelling errors.
Dialogue: (/5)
Speech that makes sense.
Plot: (/10)
Making sure the plot of the story makes sense and that it continues to flow.
Characters: (/5)
Having relatable/understandable characters, each character being unique and not just one-dimensional etc.
Includes outfits that make sense.
Extras: (/5)
Length of Chapter.
Choices.
Cliffhangers/end of chapter.
Overall: (/40)
Here I will just put general notes or anything else I want to mention.
Form
Title:
Author: (your username on episode, please don’t just say “me”)
Genre:
Description:
Number of episodes you would like me to read:
Would you like your review through DMs or in the comments here:
Is it published already:
Link:
Title: Meant To Be
Author: me
Genre: romance
Description: dont have one yet
Number of episodes you would like me to read: rn 1
Would you like your review through DMs or in the comments here: through pms
Is it published already: no
Link sent to you through pm
Title: OV: Rockstar Crush Author: me Genre: comedy Description: When your celebrity crush happens to be your rockstar roommate, your world turns upside down! Can he help you overcome your on-stage anxiety to make your singer dream come true? Number of episodes you would like me to read: 4 please Would you like your review through DMs or in the comments here: Through DMs please Is it published already: Yes Link:Episode Writer Portal
Title: Unspoken Attraction
Author: Malena
Genre: Fantasy
Description: After yrs of abuse Crystal at last, gets away with Abigail. But it’s tough to live in peace if the villain is alive, isn’t it? Worse? They’re mated to the ones they despise the most!
Number of episodes you would like me to read: 3 (Chapter 3 is not completed, I would like to know what do you think so far.)
Would you like your review through DMs or in the comments here: DM please
Is it published already: Nope.
Link: I’ll send it through DM.
Title: OV: The Hidden Truth (Where I’m From)
Author: hipsy_writes
Genre: Drama
Description: In a town, where women belong to the kitchen and are made housewives. Chadsela embarks on a journey to achieve her goals no matter what. Will she succeed?
Number of episodes you would like me to read: 4 chapters
Would you like your review through DMs or in the comments here: DM
Is it published already: Yes
Link: Episode Writer Portal
Title: Earth From Here
Author: behcuh
Genre: Action
Description: Oriana’s life twists violently in and out of the darkness as she tries to hide aboard the Rulnalta. But she got more than the authorities on her trail…(AD)(CC)(Points)(SlowBurn)
Number of episodes you would like me to read: 3
Would you like your review through DMs or in the comments here: COMMENTS PLEASE.
Is it published already: It is now published
Link:Episode Writer Portal
Thank you so much for offering this and being so organized.
Title: First One Wins
Author: Amphia
Genre: Comedy
Description: Anali is thrown into a competition against a mysterious man to steal a painting. The prize? Inheritance to an multi-billion organization of criminals.
Number of episodes you would like me to read: 8
Would you like your review through DMs or in the comments here: DM please
Thank you!
Title: Bad Behavior
Author: The Morrigan
Genre: Drama
Description: After a perfect summer with her first love, Alexis life began to change completely. The sweet little girl is no more. Find out what happened in the result of her Bad Behavior.
Number of episodes you would like me to read: 6
Would you like your review through DMs or in the comments here: DM
Is it published already: Yes
Link: Episode Writer Portal
Title: Her Stolen Dream
Author: @AdriGarai09
Genre: Fantasy
Description: A royal engagement between Chloe and Liam goes wrong when the king is killed. Now, Chloe must protect the prince and kingdom. What will happen when she’s stuck with the prince?
Number of episodes you would like me to read: 3
Would you like your review through DMs or in the comments here: In the comments
Is it published already: Yes
Link: Her Stolen Dream
