In need of a bit of assistance

Alright Imma have to send in multiple cause of the limits T - T

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Quick question…

You don’t have two female customization templates in the same chapter, do you?!

Because if so… you need to ensure the labels are different for each one.

Noooo I only have one for the fem LI and one for the Male LI (both are the different data templates.) the mc doesn’t have customisation haha!

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Okay, I think we may have found it.

When I changed: setMessage Corella will remember this.
to: readerMessage Corella will remember this.

The error disappeared.

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OMG YOU’VE DONE IT- YOU ARE AMAZING I LOVE YOU SO MUCH-

I am so crediting you for this

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Aww, I’m glad it worked! :blush:

If you ever need any more help with errors, just let me know… I’m always happy to help out! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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heyyy me again, im a pest.


Do you know how to do the screen shakey thing for when people are angry?

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Yes, I do it for one of my own stories. But can you be more specific on what you want, because there’s multiple ways to do a shaking screen. :blush:

You can often do it with quick zooms, which tend to go from one angle to another… which I usually time between 0.1 or 0.2 seconds every time it shakes.

Or you can zoom fast to a part of the screen by adding the command: usingeasebounceout after the zoom time.

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Hey sorry for delayed reply I had a driving lesson!!

I kinda want it to like go left to right quickly kinda shaking.
(to show shes furious yk?)

Right, well every zoom point is different depending on the background and where the character is stood.
Like I could give you my coding from one of my stories, but it wouldn’t work if our characters aren’t in the exact same spot… if you get what I mean?! So that wouldn’t be any good to you.

But I can still help… I could code that part for you, if you can copy and paste that particular scene here for me to edit.
Also, let me know which background you’re using. :blush:

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INT. HOSPITAL BED - DAY
&cut to zone 3
&AMELIE spot 1.091 73 378 in zone 2 AND AMELIE is sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop AND AMELIE faces right AND AMELIE moves to layer 7
&zoom reset
&NURSE MIA spot 3.233 245 -947 in zone 3 AND NURSE MIA faces right AND NURSE MIA is rear AND NURSE MIA moves to layer 7
@AMELIE changes into YoungAmelieDressCodeViolation
@NURSE MIA changes into NURSE MIA_default
sound schoolbell
@transition fade in black in 1

    NURSE MIA (talk_neutral_loop_rear)
Come on sweet pea, you gotta wake up!

@AMELIE is sleep_lay_uncomfortable_awaken_confused

&AMELIE faces left
AMELIE (talk_lay_awake_neutral_loop)
Where am I?

&NURSE MIA walks to spot 1.091 195 139 in zone 3 AND NURSE MIA is walk_talk_neutral_loop AND NURSE MIA faces left
NURSE MIA
You’re in the Nurses Office, you passed out on the lawn.

&AMELIE is idle_sit_anklescrossed_neutral_loop AND AMELIE spot 1.091 66 219 in zone 3 AND AMELIE faces left

    NURSE MIA (talk_think_neutral)
I believe the student who brought you here said,

&zoom on 859 460 to 266% in 0

    NURSE MIA (talk_shrug_concerned)
You tripped over a rock and bumped your head on the way down.

@AMELIE faces right
@pause for 0.5
&zoom on 724 517 to 141% in 1
AMELIE (idle_sit_leanback_confused_loop)
I’m sorry,

@pause for a beat
&zoom on 663 514 to 276% in 0
@speechbubble is 204 107 to 94% with tail_top_left
AMELIE (talk_sit_neutral_loop)
They said…

&zoom on 692 509 to 437% in 0
&AMELIE spot 1.091 76 169 in zone 3
@speechbubble is 190 105 to 94% with tail_top_left
&zoom on 685 526 to 450% in 2
&zoom on 708 524 to 450 in 3
&zoom on 685 526 to 450% in 2
&zoom on 695 514 to 450% in 1
AMELIE (talk_asif_angry)
| color:red , animation:shuffle-sideways , bold |WHAT-

@transition fade out black in 1
sound scream_female
&zoom reset
@AMELIE is scream_angry
@transition fade in black in 1

    AMELIE (talk_argue_handsonhips_snooty)
That jerk kicked a football at my face and has the nerve to say I tripped!

    AMELIE (talk_repulsed)
How dare she-

&zoom on 712 568 to 151% in 0
AMELIE (talk_exclaim_no_worried)
I mean who does that!

&NURSE MIA is shush_neutral
@pause for 0.3
&CORELLA stands screen center in zone 1 AND CORELLA faces right AND CORELLA is idle_worried_loop AND CORELLA moves to layer -3
@add Extravagant Rose Bouquet Flower Pink White to CORELLA
@CORELLA changes into CORELLA_young
@zoom reset

@pause for 0.1

@AMELIE is think_rubchin

    AMELIE (sigh_disappointed)
She just walked into the room, didn't she?

@pan to zone 1 in 1

@zoom on 165 0 to 304% in 0

&zoom on 151 440 to 304% in 4.5
CORELLA (talk_awkward_loop)
Is this a bad time?

@CORELLA is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

@transition fade out black in 0.5
&cut to zone 3
&AMELIE faces left AND AMELIE is talk_argue_angry
@transition fade in 0.1

&zoom on 681 520 to 324% in 0
AMELIE (talk_repulsed)
Nooo…

@transition fade out black in 0.1
&zoom on 640 520 to 229% in 4
@transition fade in black in 0.1
AMELIE (talk_accuse_angry)
You think?

To clarify, Amelie is the character who the zoom should shake on?!

Yes. Amelie got hit in the head from a football that got kicked her way, she got knocked out and brought to the school nurse. has just woken up and found out from the nurse that the person who knocked her out with the football tried to say that she tripped on a rock. (saying shes clumsy) so now shes mad at them for trying to get off the hook by indirectly calling her clumsy.

(This is like 'background stuff for my story… My story is about how present Amelie is learning to move on / mature out of the ‘highschool love triangle’ she got trapped in. (The person who knocked her out is the first highschool love interest, gonna do the whole cliche highschool football rival love interests troupe)

Okay, so… usually you can’t make it shake at the same time as the text appears, because shakes need pauses in order to operate. This means the shake will have to happen prior to Amelie saying “What?!”

So you have two options.

You can do it this way:

@pause for a beat
&zoom on 663 514 to 276% in 0
@speechbubble is 204 107 to 94% with tail_top_left
AMELIE (talk_sit_neutral_loop)
They said…

&zoom on 692 509 to 437% in 0
&AMELIE spot 1.091 76 169 in zone 3
&AMELIE is talk_asif_angry
&zoom on 681 483 to 436% in 0.1
@pause for 0.1
&zoom on 695 504 to 436% in 0.1
@pause for 0.1
&zoom on 681 483 to 436% in 0.1
@pause for 0.1
&zoom on 695 504 to 436% in 0.1
@pause for 0.1
&zoom on 692 493 to 436% in 0.1 using easebounceout
@speechbubble is 190 105 to 94% with tail_top_left
AMELIE
| color:red , animation:shuffle-sideways , bold |WHAT-

^
You can test that out in your script, to see how it appears.


Or you can do it this way:

NURSE MIA (talk_shrug_concerned)

You tripped over a rock and bumped your head on the way down.
&AMELIE faces right
@pause for 0.5
&zoom on 724 517 to 141% in 0.2
@speechbubble is 130 234 to 94% with tail_top_left
AMELIE (idle_sit_leanback_confused_loop)
I’m sorry,

AMELIE (talk_sit_neutral_loop)
They said…

&zoom on 692 509 to 437% in 0
&AMELIE spot 1.091 76 169 in zone 3
@speechbubble is 190 105 to 94% with tail_top_left
&zoom on 692 493 to 436% in 0.3 using easebounceout
AMELIE (talk_asif_angry)
| color:red , animation:shuffle-sideways , bold |WHAT-

Thankyou!

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