In need of a review for my story!

Heyyy, I’m very happy that I finished my first episode of my story! But I really need a review and my story is unpublished. :innocent: Maybe you are interested! Let me know! :sweat_smile:

Details

Story Title: Fame and Glory
Author Name: Samantha79

Story Genre: Romance/ drama
Story Description: I stepped on the red carpet and became famous. I wanted everything under one condition - to fall in love at the end, not at the beginning.
Others: LL, CC, choices matter

Link to my story:
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4628578726379520
It’s my first story!

Pls do it for me!

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I can do it

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Thank you! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Your welcome

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Can I ask you how long you still need? :sweat_smile:

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I think it’s very good!

Really? :heart_eyes:

Do you think I can improve something? And is my grammer correct?

Your grammar is fine I think!
Let me know when you publish it I’m so excited to read it

Omg thank you‘re the first person until now who read it!

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Your welcome
It’s really good :slightly_smiling_face:

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