IN NEED OF (professional) ASSISTANCE!


#1

So I added a dressing game to my story, now everything that happens in between the outfit choice and the end of the chapter won’t show up. It just skips from the end of the dressing game to the last few scenes of the chapter. I have no idea how to fix it. And it’s drivng me crazy! Is there anyone that has had this problem and have been able to fix it??


#2

Could you show some of your script? :thinking:


#3

The messed up part?


#4

Yes :smile:


#5

Ok, you’ll have to give me a moment because I’m using my tablet. I’ll have to get it from the computer


#6

I’m going to pm it to you


#7

Sure :smile:


#8

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#9

So I need some help on some coding so my character is in her room with her friend and her friend is wanting to see her 3 dresses that she bought for her date tonight so how do I make a choice like this:

label show_1

choice
“Yes”{
}
“No”{
}

And the choice yes shows three options

choice
“Red Hottie”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_casual

}
“Black Beauty”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_badass girl

}
“White Sassy”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_hot mama

}

@JADE enters from right to screen center

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

    JADE (primp)
(Do I want to wear this or choose something else??)

choice
“Choose this outfit”{

    JADE (talk_happy_smile)
I always look amazing!!

}
“Try something else”{

goto choosing_outfit

}


#10

You would put the choice in the “yes” choice like this.
label show_1

choice
“Yes” {
NARR (BLAH)
BLAHAH
choice
“Red Hottie”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_casual

}
“Black Beauty”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_badass girl

}
“White Sassy”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_hot mama

}

@JADE enters from right to screen center

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

    JADE (primp)
(Do I want to wear this or choose something else??)

choice
“Choose this outfit”{

    JADE (talk_happy_smile)
I always look amazing!!

}
“Try something else”{

goto choosing_outfit

}

}
“No” {

}


#11

choice
“Yes”{

    JADE (talk_happy_smile)
So this is what I bought!!

Label choosing_outfit

choice
“Red Hottie”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_sexy_1

}
“Black Beauty”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_sexy_2

}
“White Sassy”{

@JADE exits right

@JADE changes into JADE_sexy_3

}

@JADE enters from the right to screen center AND JADE faces left

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@SARAH is admire

    SARAH (talk_flirt)
Wow such a hottie!!!

    

    JADE (primp)
(Should I wear this for tonight??)

choice
“Hell Yes!!”{

    JADE (talk_primp_condescend)
I always look amazing!!

}
“Try Something Else On”{

goto choosing_outfit

}

}
“Nah I want it to be a secret”{

    SARAH (talk_handsonhips)
Ok miss secret

@JADE is laugh_chuckle

}

    NARRATOR (MOM)
Jade are you home dear!

ok so here is what I want it to happen but their is a error in the choice under the Red hottie choice


#12

What’s the error?


#13

Unexpected choice did u include a choice without a line of dialogue before it


#14

Just add dialogue at the beginning of that line or before.


#15

So now the problem is that every time when I give the player the option to pick what dress to wear and two options (Hell Yes) or (Try Something Else On) and when I click on the option of Try Something it brings me to the start choice

(Should I let her see my dresses and give her a little show??)

choice
“Yes”{
}
“Nah I want it to be a secret”{
}


#16

The label still there and the goto?


#17

Yes but I can’t put it on the top of the dialog because that is what keeps making it do that and can’t put underneath the choice because i get a error


#18

I can just make a template if you want.


#19

that will be helpful


#20

It would have to be later though since I’m not on my computer, I’m on mobile. You could try the dialogue before the choice though if you haven’t tried that yet.