Hi. this is @Hufflepuff90 and I was wondering if you could help me out with my characters’ dialogue. Because they’re all from Guatemala, Venezuela and Puerto Rico. I have other characters, but I’m trying to figure out where they could be from. Like Benito Ramirez and Kayla Lopez.
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Yes ofc I can help you! But I have to tell you: I’m not Latina, so maybe some translations aren’t exactly like how they speak there. Because even tho we speak the same language, some words and expressions change.
That’s fine. anyway, in episode 3 of my story, I was going to have Benito and Rosita have an amicable break up, but with the way he uses her for bets and caring more about his huge ego and football status than his so-called relationship and girlfriend, he’s going to be harsh, straightforward and completely rude. Causing her to either slap him or punch him.
Ok, so whats the dialogue you want me to translate?
MC: I’m sorry, but I just can’t be with you anymore.
Benito: WHY?!
MC: Because, I knew that you were behind this bet the whole time and I know that your stupid friends put you up to this!
Benito: Like how?
MC: Like having me to sleep with you without my consent. But, you don’t have to worry about me. Because I’m sick and tired of your egotistical ways and dominant attitude, just to make yourself look good in front of your friends or if you don’t, you’ll be shunned by them.
Benito: Hey! It’s not my fault that I’m like this.
MC: LIKE HOW?! BEING AN EGOTISTICAL JERK?
What happened to the Benito I met and fell in love with at the club?
Benito: He changed for the better.
MC: Yeah right. Because football turns you into a steroid jack ass!
If you love Football so much, then why don’t you marry it? Because I’m done with you!
I can’t stay with someone who would choose Football over me. Good-Bye Benito Ramirez!
MC slaps him one more time and then leaves in tears.
Benito: To hell with her. I don’t need her. Besides, she was only holding me back.
MC: Lo siento, pero ya no puedo estar contigo.
Benito: ¿Por que?
MC: ¡Porque, sabía que estabas detrás de esta apuesta todo el tiempo y sabía que los estúpidos de tus amigos te metieron en esto!
Benito: ¿Pero cómo?
MC: Cómo hacer que me acostara contigo sin mi consentimiento. Pero, tú no te preocupes por mí. Porque estoy harta de tu egoísmo y de tu actitud dominante, solo para quedar bien delante de tus amigos y si no lo haces, serás rechazado por ellos.
Benito: ¡Ey! No es mi culpa que yo sea así.
MC: ¡¿COMO?! ¿SIENDO UN GILIPOLLAS EGOÍSTA? ¿Que pasó con el Benito que conocí y del que me enamoré en la discoteca?
Benito: Cambió para bien.
MC: Sí claro. ¡Porque el fútbol te convierte en burro de esteroides!
Si te gusta tanto el fútbol, entonces ¿por que no casas con él? ¡Porque yo he terminado contigo!
No puedo estar con alguien que elegiría el fútbol antes que a mí. ¡Adiós Benito Ramírez!
MC lo abofetea una vez más y luego se va llorando.
Benito: Al infierno con ella. No la necesito. Aparte, ella solo me echaba para atrás.
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OMG! Thanks. I needed this. This is definitely going to be useful for the third episode and breakup between Benito and the MC. 
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No prob! Don’t hesitate to ask me if u need any help!
Sure thing. Oh and do you have an Instagram? Because I would love to follow you.
HEY ALL! Guess what? I finally published the first 3 episodes of Blind Date! I want to thank Chamoybebe and AriaAdams for all the help they’ve given me! You guys are seriously the best!
@mt.episode (you wanted to see my first ever story? 
try not to judge too harshly lol)
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I’ll going to read it when I get a chance! Thanks for letting me know
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Just whats is your author name bc I cant find it
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I will like to thank you again for helping me)
- IS THAT A REAL SHARK?! (not giving context here but )
- You ever lay a hand on her again and they won’t find your f#cking body!
3.Do you understand me, you little b#tch! - EVER AGAIN!
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No worries, I’ll translate it in a few hours if it isn’t urgent 
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There’s absolutely no rush! I just published the first 3 episodes and I’m starting work on #4. 
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Translation:
- ¿ESO ES UN TIBURÓN DE VERDAD?
- ¡Ponle las manos encima otra vez y no encontrar tu p*to cadáver!
- ¿Me entiendes, perra?
- ¡NUNCA MÁS!
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Thank you so much!! 
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