Ink characters for my story

Hi as the title suggests I need ink characters for my story. It is released and called Outrunning Karma - so feel free to read it.

Here is the form:

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Yeah, I love the song and the title outrunning karma fit my story line :revolving_hearts:

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Sameeeee :heartbeat::heartbeat:

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submitted 8 characters hope they help you

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Thank you

no problem

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Oof I want to read your story

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When will it be out or Could you send me a PrEvIeW

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Lmao can’t read sorry sis😂

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It is already out

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I know I have red it like a few minutes ago

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What do you think?

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Uhm I have mixed feelings (Imma do a little review):
-spelling is good
-the plot is good
-directing is like a 4/10 because I would do it like more with overlays and stuff you know
-I sound really mean now But the first episode is only cc and most people would not read further I did But ok and everything Goes like a little much to fast like in one scene she kills people and in the next she is homeless you have to write more in details and extend it a little bit more

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Owh and Maybe ADD sound

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