Hi Oumniaa,
I just read the 1st four episodes of your story and I must say I am impressed at how you are tackling a tough subject. I think your story is going to help a lot of people… so way to go!
I am super glad that Kethius has a good friend that was so understanding and not judgmental. I also really felt the pain of the mother, she is so trying to do the right thing for Kethius.
Nicoleloreal
P.S. If you would like my suggestions and screen shots, please follow me on Instagram @episode.nikkiloreal
My story is
Title:
H & V: The Hacker Chronicles
Genre: Adventure
Follow three best friends on an epic post-apocalyptic quest to find the rightful heir to the throne!
90% customized backgrounds! Choices Matter You Play All Three Characters
I look forward to your thoughts!