Is my description attractive to readers?


#1

Hi there! I’m Mila and I’m a new author. I made my first story called Remember Me. The genre is Drama.

This is my story’s description:
When Dean bumps into his ex/first love, she doesn’t remember who he is. Turns out she got her mind erased of him. Will Dean be able to move on and forget her too?

Is this description attractive enough to get readers?

Here are my covers to go along with my story:

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And snipits of my story:


#2

Yes!! I would definetly read! Not only does it grab the readers attention because of how unique it is, it also adds mystery to make the reader want to keep reading!

Best of luck with your story!


#3

:wink: :wink:

Yes I believe this is an amazing description and your story is so awesome.

SO PLEASE READ THIS STORY THANK YOU!

LIKE NOW GO ON THE APP AND READ IT BECAUSE THIS STORY DESERVES SO MUCH LOVE.

:heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::gift_heart::gift_heart::gift_heart::gift_heart::gift_heart:


#4

Thanks love :heart:️:heart:️:heart:️:heart:️ :kissing_heart::kissing_heart::kissing_heart:


#5

I love this! It sounds like something I’d read. :black_heart:


#6

Thank you! This is my first story so I just want to make sure everything is good. :see_no_evil:


#7

bumping this important thread!