Is my story worth continuing? Brutal feedback needed (on half of the first episode)

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I was wondering if anyone would be able to read the beginning of the first episode of my story. I can’t tell if it’s intriguing or interesting enough as I have read it so many times I feel like I have become immune to the story.
I know I should write for myself but I want to write to keep people entertained and something to look forward to. I don’t want to continue writing this story if it’s gonna be a flop as I have college from 9 to 4 every week day and work on the weekends and it’s too much time to waste if what i’m writing is bad and boring. It’s also on a cliche topic, but I was planning to add some twists to make it realistic but I need the beginning to be interesting enough for readers to get to the twists.

If you’re interested, let me know and I will PM you the link. It will probably not even take 5 minutes :slight_smile:
All I want is constructive feedback and whether you would continue reading it once published or if you found yourself clicking (at god’s speed) to get through it.

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hey! id be happy to read it for you :))

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Ahhh thank you so muchhhh, sending it to u now :slight_smile:

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i’ll be happy to help too! :))

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Thanks, wasn’t expecting replies this quickly. Sending it your way now :slight_smile:

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I can also help :hugs:

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Spendiddd!! Sending it to you now

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I would love to read your story too

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Im happy to give it a look and give you any feedback I may have.

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I will do it for u bae!!

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Hi. I would be happy to read the story.

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sending you new version now :slight_smile:

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