Is something wrong with my script?


#1

label car_choices

GWEN (think_rubchin)
(Umm?)

choice
“Why work for me?” {

@CHRISTOPHER is deepbreath and GWEN is think_rubchin
CHRISTOPHER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Well my father wanted me to work with him

       CHRISTOPHER  (talk_book_open_neutral)

But I wanted to work on my own

       CHRISTOPHER  (talk_book_open_neutral)

Yeah I know my father helped me get this job but at least

       CHRISTOPHER  (talk_book_open_neutral)

I am not on his payroll.

} “Do you have a girlfriend?” {
CHRISTOPHER (talk_book_open_neutral)
That would be a question I answer to my |bold,italic| friends.

@GWEN is eyeroll_sarcastic and CHRISTOPHER is laugh_chuckle
CHRISTOPHER (talk_book_open_neutral)
But to answer your question no I do not.

CHRISTOPHER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Just a best friend named Maliyah so Ms. Brey

CHRISTOPHER (talk_book_open_neutral)
You still got a shot.

@GWEN is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

CHRISTOPHER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Kidding.

@GWEN is eyeroll_sarcastic

}“Favortie tv show?” {
CHRISTOPHER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Easy Supernatural.

GWEN (talk_think_neutral)
Interesting?

    CHRISTOPHER  (talk_book_open_neutral)

Let me guess you like…

    CHRISTOPHER  (talk_book_open_neutral)

|italic,bold| Grey’s Anatomy?

GWEN (talk_sarcastic)
Close but its TVD.

    CHRISTOPHER  (talk_book_open_neutral)

Ahh see one thing we have in common we like |bold,italic| supernatural things.

}“Do you believe in love” {
CHRISTOPHER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Of course I do, don’t you?

GWEN (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
I believe that love is weakness.
It doesn’t work it’s all fake.

    CHRISTOPHER  (talk_book_open_neutral)

Maybe you haven’t been looking for it in the right place.

@GWEN is eyeroll_sarcastic

    CHRISTOPHER  (talk_book_open_neutral)

Love is them most important thing you could possibly have and give.

GWEN (talk_sad)
Yeah unitl you vow to

GWEN (talk_airquotes)
Love each other forever

GWEN (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Then you get cold feet.

@CHRISTOPHER is deepbreath and GWEN is eyeroll_sarcastic

}

CHRISTOPHER (talk_book_open_neutral)
Anything else?
choice
“Yes” {
goto car_choices
}

“No” {

GWEN (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
That’ all I have.
}
INT. PENTHOUSE - NIGHT
@GWEN enters from left to screen right and GWEN faces left
@CHRISTOPHER spot 1.549 -183 -94 and CHRISTOPHER faces right
@CHRISTOPHER walks to spot 1.369 62 -4
CHRISTOPHER (talk_think_neutral)
What a nice place you got here


#2

Um is there an error showing in the portal?


#3

Remove the line between those. It should be:

} “No” {

or

}
“No” {


#4

ohhhh okay thanks so much


#5

#6

Solved and closed. :smiley: