Is the story plot good?

One year ago I started writing a story but it was SO bad I decided to rewrite it COMPLETELY. But now I am wondering if the plot is good at all…
Let’s say you see this description on Episode, would you give the story a try or wouldn’t like it?

By accident you find out that you are adopted. But when you go to your favorite spot and get beamed away you notice that adoption is the LEAST of your problems since you are not human but fairy and your kingdom needs you.

Is it a plot people could like or would you say I should just stop writing it. And if, what do you think could be a better idea?


I like it, so is she (assumed) a warrior princess, stop being nosy Alea


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