Is There anyone who wants a story rewiew? (LIMELIGHT ONLY!)

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#1

Hey guys i an doing storie rewiews and would love If you recomended some.
Ooh and i am honest With my rewiews and remember i DO NOT want to offend anybody.
IT’S CONTSRUCTIV CRITISISM!!!

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  1. I ONLY do LIMELIGT rewiews

  2. NO DRAMA!

  3. Don’t recomend any other/youselfs threads

  4. Don’t rush me

  5. CODE: STORY_RE1

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  1. Story title

  2. Descrpition

  3. Link


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#2

Moved to Share Feedback since it’s about reviews. :stuck_out_tongue:


#3

Greetings.

If you’re interested an well directed comedy with art scenes then look no further.

Story Title: Not to Hot (limelight)
Genre: Comedy/drama
Author: Zaddy
Description: (the story takes place in South Korea) A young highschool student named Dante has been bullied all his life due to his weight. After changing schools to have a new start, he wakes up one morning in a completely different body. This new body is GORGEOUS. Everytime he falls asleep he switches bodies; his old body works at night while his new body attends school. Dante thought that being attractive means his life would become significantly easier, he was dead wrong.


#4

Can you please read and review my story?
Name: Opposite in Harmony
Author: Pheebsnomenal
Genre: fantasy/adventure/romance
After 1412 years, Aimie finally decides to visit Earth and that is when her life turns up side down. She finds out that sometimes you can’t judge a book by it’s cover. Will she ever find her way back to her family even if that means living a lie? Or will she choose to abandon everything she ever knew and live an honest life?

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#5

Hey i have read the first chapter of your story and it’s Good but There is some places where you maybe should Think about putting some fadeing in like fx after you have introduceret yourself and so on maybe fade out White.
And the same when the explaniton ends.
You should maybe also like try to explain where they are Because it’s always Good for the reader to know What envioment they are in.
The MC Can come of a bit childish so If that is Not how you want here to come OFF maybe you should change some of the things she says.
And If she choses to like Pick the coffe have another animation where she drinks Because right now you are using an eating animation.
Remember this is constructive critisism
I do NOT wanna offend anybody


#6

You have not enteret the code


#7

Yes I have? Lmao


#8

Can i ask where? i can’t seem to find it


#9

#10

thank you soooo much!


#11

Your welcome


#12

Can you review my story?
Title - Midnight Memories
Author - Evija
Episodes - 16
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5689448274984960


#13

ME! Code: STORY_RE1

Name: The Ember Moon Pack

Description:

Vampires, werewolves, and hybrids – who will you side with? Hey, Hybrid Queen, hurry up. War is on its way.

Customizable Characters, LGBTQ+, 5 Endings, Choices Matter, Music

Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight

Link:

Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

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#14

Sure who made your cover i love it


#15

@nopaks_artist on IG :slight_smile: thanks!


#16

Hey Hannah_minna !
I would like to have some feedbacks about my story. :smiley_cat:

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Title : Good Morning Stockholm !
Author : Elysium
Characters : Limelight
Episodes : For know, there is only… But more episodes are coming soon :wink:
Description: A hold-up goes wrong and Ellie’s life is turned upside down. Between love, lies, secrets and hate, what will prevail ? Will Ellie succumb to madness or love ?
About the story : What’s gonna happened to Ellie ? she will discover some secrets about her past and her family. Will she find a way to escape from her captors ? Or will she fall in love with the mysterious and sexy Dean ?
Instagram : elysium.episode05
Link to the story : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6039258979500032
A special thanks yo you for this topic :blush:


#17

Are you from sweden?


#18

Story title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5874052041146368

Code: STORY_RE1


#19

No , I’m from France ! :blush::v:t3: