Is this a good description?

Hey! I’m writing a story and was wondering if I could get any feedback on my description for it. Here it is:
After her last one, Marceline isn’t eager for a relationship. But when sweet, lovable Axel finds his way into her life - will she be able to resist much longer?

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Hey, i really like it, it sounds interesting! Good luck with your story!

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Thank you!

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