Is this a good introduction?

So I’m making a comedy called Tati’s Daily Life. Is this introduction good?
TATI: Hello, my name is Tati, I’m 19, and I have dreams of being a rapper.
AMY: Who are you talking to?
TATI: The reamer, rooder, redone?
AMY: You mean reader?
TATI: Yes…
LESHANA: I’m surrounded by weirdos. Reader, help us out.
AMY: I think you both are crazy! We’re not in a book, silly!
TATI: You don’t know it yet, but we’re in an Episode story.
AMY: Oh crap.

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I like it I think its cute!

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I laughed! It’s funny!

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