Is this a good plot for my story?

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#1

Here is the general plot/description of my upcoming story: “When Celeste is appointed as queen, she must oversee the universe. Disaster arises from every corner. What makes matters worse? She is falling in love with a lowly human.”

All criticism is welcome! Please tell me if this is too cliche or give and advice to further this plot.


#2

Nah , it’s nice plot , l totally love the idea of universe Queen :blush:


#3

If you made her a strong, badass queen (not meaning evil or cruel), I would definitely read it. Episode needs more girl power! :smiley:


#4

Thank you!


#5

I might just have to add that in! Thank you for the idea!