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I think this is a good idea for a story, but I don’t know if the whole mafia thing would fit in. I personally am not a fan of mafia stories, but I think it would be a great idea to write a story about a disabled kid. It would be even more interesting if you write it in the disabled kid’s point of view. However this is just my personal opinion. Good luck on your story!!
Okay I was kind of unsure about the mafia part anyway, actually. I didn’t think it would fit in but my friend loves mafia stories and wanted me to write one (so do i but yeah I’m really bad at writing them…)
Thanks for your feedback and I want to write a story about a disabled kid maybe i could even cut the professer part out
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