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Follow the story that consists of a near irresistible attraction of two teens, both have feelings for each other, but their bond of friendship keeps them from taking the next step.

I don’t want to give too much away about my story here , but the story is about my MC moving in with her aunt and running into an old friend she hasn’t seen since she was eight years old. Now she’s finds herself crushing hard on him. It’s obvious to everyone else around them that they each have feelings for one another, but MC refuses to admit it or do anything about it because of their strong friendship and LI has a girlfriend.

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I think its great!

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bit of a run on sentence! try this instead;

Follow the story that consists of a near irresistible attraction between two teens. Both have feelings for each other, but their friendship of years is keeping them from taking the next step.

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