I am writing a story named The Bet. Last few days I’ve been feeling like changing the description, but I am insecure because it may sound stupid or not grammatically correct. How is this:
She is a rude spoiled brat. He is a boy with a painful past. When he makes a bet on her their lives will have a drastic turn. Will the opposites attract?
What should I change? Is it grammatically correct?
It should be her or their not both
i would change ‘will have’ to ‘will take’, but apart from tjat it sounds good (:
no there just needs to be a comma between the two
Ahhh I see I read it the other way
Thank you
me too for a second oops
Thank you guys <3
She is a rude spoiled brat. He is a boy with a painful past. When he makes a bet on her, their lives will have a drastic turn. Will the opposites attract?
just missing a coma, it sounds perfectly fine dont worry 