Is this dressing game right?


#1

Is there someone who can help me with this. Below you can see a dressing game I created, however, the site is telling there’s an error on the line where it says “Simple Blue” however I can’t figure it out, please could someone help me?

label garden_party

    BETH (think_rubchin)
(Hmm ........)

choice
“Floral Dress” {
@BETH exits right
@pause for a beat
@BETH changes into Garden Party 1
@BETH enters from right to screen right
}

    HEIDI (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Is this the one you want?

choice
“Yes” {

gain TRIED_GARDENPARTY1

} “No” {

goto garden_party
}

} “Simple Blue” {
@BETH exits right
@pause for a beat
@BETH changes into Garden Party 2
@BETH enters from right to screen right
}

    HEIDI (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Is this the one you want?

choice
“Yes” {

gain TRIED_GARDENPARTY2

} “No” {

goto garden_party
}

} “Red Lace” {
@BETH exits right
@pause for a beat
@BETH changes into Garden Party 3
@BETH enters from right to screen right
}

    HEIDI (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Is this the one you want?

choice
“Yes” {

gain TRIED_GARDENPARTY3

} “No” {

goto garden_party
}
}


#2

Could you take a screenshot of what the error says?


#3

Its the one that says unexpected block end and did you forget to put in a { or }


#4

I’ll try copy and pasting it into my script, give me a min


#5

Okay, thanks :slight_smile:


#6

I think you forgot to put the word choice before the choice


#7

No, that can’t be it, because there would have to be speech before the word choice and I don’t think that’s the issue, I’m just really confused, thank you though :slight_smile:


#8

Right, its time for bed here in the UK, its a quarter to 1 here so I’m sorry if I don’t reply to any messages for several hours, thank you for all your help though, I do appreciate it :slight_smile:


#9

Here’s what I mean

Summary

You can see that the Simple Blue Dress is part of the same choice line as the “Are you sure” choice line. Also, there is an unnecessary parenthesis before the choice “Simple Blue” (I think)


#10

Sorry I changed it some- I just have an easier time with goto’s

label garden_party
BETH (think_rubchin)
(Hmm …)
choice
“Floral Dress” {
@BETH exits right
@pause for a beat
@BETH changes into Garden Party 1
@BETH enters from right to screen right
goto one_want
}
label one_want
HEIDI (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Is this the one you want?
choice
“Yes” {
gain TRIED_GARDENPARTY1
} “No” {
goto garden_party
}
“Simple Blue” {
@BETH exits right
@pause for a beat
@BETH changes into Garden Party 2
@BETH enters from right to screen right
goto one_want
}
“Red Lace” {
@BETH exits right
@pause for a beat
@BETH changes into Garden Party 3
@BETH enters from right to screen right
goto one_want
}

This worked for me
(I’m sorry if this turned out weird, my web previewer wasn’t working and the story I used to test this wouldn’t appear on my phone)


#11

Thank you