I’m writing a story called Muse and I’ve just finished writing the first episode. There is no customization and (as of now) no choices. I’ve written about 1100 lines (that number might increase slightly if I make a few edits and add more directing). I use advanced spot directing, zooms, and (so far) 1 overlay (I’m planning to add more later). There are 5 major scenes (one of which is the intro/foreshadowing). I also timed by story and it is ~10 minutes long.
Would you guys read this story? If not, I would really appreciate feedback on how to make my first episode better!
**Story description (in case you were wondering): Levi used to be known as the King of Demons, but now he has decided to give up that life and lay low. But, what happens when a new danger forces him back to his old ways? Will he be able to protect the people that he loves?
Read my stories, then…
You find them under my profile at Episode: AngelWings…
They have no choices…
For me personally… I don’t care if there are choices or not…
It’s about the story itself I care about…
But as a writer it is totally difficult for me to form the choices into my stories…
So that’s the reason why I have no choices in my stories…
I would read it…
I don’t use choices either…
Mostly I have 1000 'til 2000 lines, too…
I try to make around 2000 lines or even more… 'cause that makes it more exciting for readers…
But if I like your story I don’t care how many lines you have…
) I don’t like choices tho 
