Is this good plot? I would love some suggestions

So I am planning to write a story titled “my boyfriend’s hot daddy”.
You wanted to meet company’s s ceo regarding some professional work. But he did not gave you time and tou kept waiting for like ages. You got annoyed af and then and were just returning when a hot gentleman took you to his office. He looked soooo goood! A charming smile, deep blue eyes and a good sense of humour. But when you reached office you found out he himself was the ceo! You shared a personal moment and things got steamy!
But what happens when you find out that he is your boyfriend’s step daddy. Will his charm take you away? Or will you be able to keep your and your boyfriends relationship
(though he is only a year older than his son and the marriage is just an official thingdue to some publicity matter)
Ah i know thats sucks but just thought to ask if you would like to read this kind of story?

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Is she cheating on him?

Personally I wouldn’t, I don’t like age gaps and daddy sounds cringe to me. And it seems really messed up to (if she isn’t cheating) have dated his step son than him.

Just my opinion

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it is kinda a cliche story but i love cliche stories and if it’s wrote good with some twists i would read it!

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Nvm about the age gap :joy:

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that story sound kinda creepy. I would not read it. I dont like age gaps and hate cheating

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I do like age gaps but in this case they don’t really have one. I hate cheating tho

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I think the plot’s cliche but it’s alright, as long as it’s written well but without the part where you cheat on your boyfriend :sweat_smile: (I don’t like that personally)

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It sound interesting so yes I will give it a try just send me the link when or if your post it on here or pm me it on instagram @elizabethrose.episode.

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I feel like you’re kidding.

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I think to fix the cheating issue many have, it spices things up in the story lol like when you start to flirt with the other guy in a love triangle but then the guy gets mad and tells you how you were unofficially dating, but you should just have that scene be a choice or have it happen while you’re having a rough patch with the boyfriend, like during a break.

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yes in my opinion this difinely will spices things up and make it more interesting to read.

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Ueah I guess . Thanks for the idea . I suck at writing and I was feeling like I should better stick to art :joy::grin:

Tysm for your suggestion

Sure I will send you :heart_eyes:

Yep! I understand :joy::joy::joy::joy: I will do somethinf for it

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Is it that bad? Lol :joy:

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Thankyou luv ! I will definitely add something new to it!

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No no…it was the title that got me.

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Yeah lol its just temporary . I will definitely make it something more um…i dont know amazing :sweat_smile::stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:

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