Is this intro good?

I made this intro for another story but I want to use it for my new story

The story hasn’t been published or anything but would it be an ok intro ? :thinking:

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It’s a neat idea for an intro, but I think it would have to be a specific story/genre for it to work.

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It looks nice, but it doesn’t give an exact feel as to where the story might go, the central tone, or genre.

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It’s a drama/horror story :blush:

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I understand that lol

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Is it like psychological horror?

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I guess you can say that :thinking: this story is of war

Maybe I should make a new intro :joy:

If it’s a story about war, you could start the story off with the descent or marching to the battlefield.

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That’s a good idea I’ll think about it thanks!

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Well, it’s a pretty cool intro, but maybe too long, I guess I have a short attention spam :laughing:

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Closed by OP request. :slight_smile: