I’m really into this story idea I’m working on but I’m very worried it’s too cliche.
Riley O’Connells is the perfect girl. Straight A’s, great looks, a kind personality, great friends, an amazing boyfriend and everyone at her school practically bowing down to her. Her mom got in a severe car crash and lost her memory 9 years ago and so Riley is very protective of her. But she falls head over heels in love with the new boy coming to school. She’s never felt this way about anyone before, and she doesn’t know what to do. He’s sweet, smart, and amazing. After a big mistake at a party, she ends up cheating on her boyfriend with him. But someone sees and threatens to tell the entire school unless Riley gives up everything to her, and she eventually loses everything.
That’s going into a lot of depth for my story, but does it sound too cliche? If not, what should I work on for the storyline? Please let me know, I’m not scared of criticism.