Its to long and I need help shorting it for the story description

Jason comes home after 4 years of the army and getting hurt and being discharged was the last thing he wanted. He never really fit in as a kid and now that he’s back home he feels alone but will the new guy make him feel alive and wanted? Male MC Full CC
Can someone word this sorter so I may us? Thank you

hmmm
how about…
Being sent home after his injury in the army was the last thing Jason wanted. After 4 years he still feels like an outcast. But will the new guy make him feel alive and wanted?

thats all I can think of right now, you also can’t add Male MC Full CC though

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I like it thank you

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