I've done all these choices, but when i press "Im done, customizing" on my script it just stays still and does nothing

Can you send a pic of the script that shows that part?

Yes, and thank you so much for replying so fast!

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NARRATOR
Do you want to change anything for the party?

choice
“Yes I want to customize!” {

goto label hair_and_lip

} “No I don’t” {

goto after_template

}

label hair_and_lip
NARRATOR
What do you want to change?

choice
“Hairstyle” {
@MAISIE starts idle
goto HLT_Hair
} “Lipstick” {
@MAISIE starts idle
goto HLT_Lip
} “This looks good!” {
}goto HLT_finish

label HLT_Hair

    NARRATOR
Choose your hairstyle.

choice
“Beach Wave”{
@MAISIE changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
goto HLT_Hair
}“Straight”{
@MAISIE changes hair into Straight
goto HLT_Hair
}“Messy Back Bun”{
@MAISIE changes hair into Messy Back Bun
goto HLT_Hair
}“High Ponytail”{
@MAISIE changes hair into High Ponytail
goto HLT_Hair
}“Fishtail Braid”{
@MAISIE changes hair into Fishtail Braid
goto HLT_Hair
}”Braided Crown”{
@MAISIE changes hair into Braid Crown Updo
goto HLT_Hair
}“Done”{
}goto hair_and_lip

label HLT_Lip

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Natural Colors” {
goto HLT_Natural
} “Bright Colors” {
goto HLT_Bright
} “Dark Colors” {
goto HLT_Dark
}“Done”{
goto hair_and_lip
}

label HLT_Natural

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Blush” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Blush
goto HLT_Natural
} “Dune” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Dune
goto HLT_Natural
} “Ivory” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Ivory
goto HLT_Natural
} “Mocha” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Mocha
goto HLT_Natural
} “Taupe” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Taupe
goto HLT_Natural
} “Terracotta” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Terracotta
goto HLT_Natural
} “Toffee” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Toffee
goto HLT_Natural
} “Next Page” {
goto HLT_Natural2
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto HLT_Lip
} “Done” {
goto hair_and_lip
}

label HLT_Natural2

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Umber” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Umber
goto HLT_Natural2
} “Rosewood” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Rosewood
goto HLT_Natural2
} “Dusty Rose” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Dusty Rose
goto HLT_Natural2
} “Dark” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Dark
goto HLT_Natural2
} “Sable” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Sable
goto HLT_Natural2
} “Chestnut” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Chestnut
goto HLT_Natural2
} “Previous Page” {
goto HLT_Natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto HLT_Lip
} “Done” {
goto hair_and_lip
}

label HLT_Bright

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Bubblegum Pink” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Bubblegum Pink
goto HLT_Bright
} “Champagne” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Champagne
goto HLT_Bright
} “Olive” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Olive
goto HLT_Bright
} “Cherry Red” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
goto HLT_Bright
} “Orange Crush” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Orange Crush
goto HLT_Bright
} “Raspberry” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Raspberry
goto HLT_Bright
} “Next Page” {
goto HLT_Bright2
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto HLT_Lip
} “Done” {
goto hair_and_lip
}

label HLT_Bright2

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Rose” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Rose
goto HLT_Bright2
} “Ruby Red” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Ruby Red
goto HLT_Bright2
} “Seafoam” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Seafoam
goto HLT_Bright2
} “Sky Blue” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Sky Blue
goto HLT_Bright2
} “White” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into White
goto HLT_Bright2
} “Lavender” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Lavender
goto HLT_Bright2
} “Previous Page” {
goto HLT_Bright
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto HLT_Lip
} “Done” {
goto hair_and_lip
}

label HLT_Dark

    NARRATOR
Choose your lip color.

choice
“Azure” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Azure
goto HLT_Dark
} “Raven” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Raven
goto HLT_Dark
} “Bordeaux” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
goto HLT_Dark
} “Plum” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Plum
goto HLT_Dark
} “Emerald” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Emerald
goto HLT_Dark
} “Scarlet” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Scarlet
goto HLT_Dark
} “Wine” {
@MAISIE changes mouthColor into Wine
goto HLT_Dark
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto HLT_Lip
} “Done” {
goto hair_and_lip
}

label HLT_Finish

    NARRATOR
Is this the look you're going for?

choice
“Yes, I look perfect!”{
goto story_continue
} “No, let me try a different color.”{
goto hair_and_lip
}

label story_continue

That is my script

Did you put anything after label story_continue? Like, make her exit to the left and such?

Yes.
@MAISIE exits right.

Shouldn’t it be:

} “This looks good!” {
goto HLT_finish
}

You have goto HLT_finish outside.

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Oh jeez. How did I miss that?? :rofl:

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Where the choice says done you put the label to go to the start not the label “HTL_Finish”

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Could you explain?
I just copied and pasted someone else’s template.

Yeah, give me a sec

You also have the goto outside here as well (the part I bolded) :smiley:

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It’s OK, it’s hard to spot XD

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This is why I can’t help anyone with this stuff. :joy: I suck at it.

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Nah, don’t be hard on yourself, you tried and that’s what matters the most :smile: :heart:

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:woman_facepalming:t4: I lost the error but found another one

so you’re missing the label at the end of the script

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I changed it, but she is still just standing there.

This is my first time writing a story, so I know im dumb, and probably difficult to work with. I dont really know what you mean, im sorry

If any of yall know how to make custom lip and hair choice templates, that would be great.

To make it easier for you, you should erase the whole template and copy and paste from someone else

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