Jadlyss Story Review! {CLOSED}



Recently, I have decided to become an online school student, which means I have A LOT of free time on my hands.
I’ve decided that i’d really like to take the time out to read some of your stories, as well as critiquing them in a respectful manner.

How to submit your story

1. Below, list the name of your story.
2. A small summary of the plot.
3. The genre of your story.
4. What style you’ve decided to use for your story.

I like to keep it nice and simple for you guys :slight_smile:

Incomplete Story List

In this tab, i’ll have a list of stories that have been requested for me to review. (THAT I HAVE NOT READ YET.)

  1. Save Me, Hero! - Turtle_cat
  2. Trouble In Princess Paradise - Rosina V.
  3. Autumn Falls - Luna
Completed Story List

In this tab, i’ll list the stories that I have successfully read and review!

  1. Without You - Georgia Sanders
How long will it take for my story to be read?

Like I said earlier, I have a lot of free time on my hands.
It’ll also depend on how high up you are on the list.
Estimated time if you are on the top of the list 1 hour


Please be aware that when I review your story I will…

  1. Be completely and utterly honest, I won’t sugarcoat my opinion
    (I would also never be rude towards you.)
  2. Review your grammatical errors, as well as covers,splashes, etc…
  3. Review your spot and zoom directing.
  4. Review if your characters personalities are fluent throughout the chapters.

I’ll PM you my review, with this following rubric filled out by me.

Thank you so much if you decide to let me review your story!


Heres mine if your interested!
Title: Without You
Author: Georgia Sanders
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: After a tragic accident, Kelsey struggles to find her way. That is until she meets mysterious, bad boy, Axel, who hides a dark secret.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4784592154656768

Thank you :blush:


I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of refugees who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Style: Ink
I published this a few days ago, so it only has 3 episodes.


  1. Trouble In Princess Paradise
    2.Description:How will Rose save the 4 kingdoms after things begin to fall apart after the Solar Eclipse?
    Corruption,secrecy,drama, & the cherry on top: romance.

If you could PM me the review :slight_smile:


Story: Autumn Falls.
Author: Luna.
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Chapters: 6 available to read.
Description: As Autumn falls in love for the first time, her life begins to fall apart. As a web of dirty secrets & lies unravel, a dangerous connection between their families is discovered.


  1. Name of Story: Sophisticated & Deceived
  2. Ashden, a 26 year old young woman learns that life isn’t about being emotionless and too sophisticated. Meanwhile, a guy comes into her life to help explore her emotions, but unfortunately 3. Ashden won’t let him get too far into her life.
  3. Ink

Thank you so much~
If you have any questions about my story, you can PM me or send me a DM on Instagram @brianam.stories :slight_smile:


Who made your cover?


I did x


Babe who made your cover art? It’s heavenly! :innocent:


I made them :slight_smile: and thank you! x


This story is good. No actually it is excellent. I loved reading it.


I know you are closed but this is for when you reopen!!

Crossed Paths

This story is about Mindy whose gone through a rough break up and she has caught the eye of Derek but can Derek change the way she sees love??

Genre: Rom Com (I am so stupid but I make myself laugh bc of this story so it is in Comedy)

Style: INK


Thanks babe! :kissing_heart:


You’re really talented!


Thank you! x


You really are!
It’s really amazing :heart:
If you use a tablet (iPad, android…)
Do you use an apple pen?


I just used my fingers on an iphone 6 haha


Omg girl wowoooww I cannot even with your talent


hahahaha Thank you!!


I believe you deserve so much success with your story! I have read stories like yours - I just fangirl about their excellence!