My Review
First of all, the gun overlay sliding across the floor was epic. The Adventurous Undercover Princess Overlay was very cool and cute.
For the most part, your directing was smooth and you got a good grip on it. When Brianna is punching the officer in the beginning, she is punching the air behind him. Put her at a higher layer as she punches him.
“Now, where was I?” Ha ha ha, I love how sassy Brianna is <3
BRIANNA: Sure you did, brother. <- the comma can go after did but having it go after you makes the sentence awkward.
When we customize the characters, you have all features present except for a few. I recommend to use Dara’s templates for customization as she has all ink feature present within the CC templates.
When Brianna’s laying in bed, thinking about how crappy her life is, the speechbubble covers a bit of her face. You can use Apes’ tutorial and position it lower.
BRIANNA: Women have (like) zero rights <- much better to write out zero as opposed to 0.
Faker than global warming? Lol, that part made me giggle. The gems are plastic, but don’t Brianna and Thomas know that life in plastic is fantastic? XD
Loved how the cops showed up with their guns and Brianna just slammed the door.
I like some of the choices you had. When the officer says Freeze! I picked “Lol u thought”
I also loved the timed choices. I saved my bro.
The cops have numbers next to their name like Cop6. I recommend to change all of the officer’s display names to Cop. Script names and display names are different. But perhaps you did this for a comedic effect. Either way, I thought I’d let you know.
King George of England’s deal is scary! Execution or riches…yikes! Good thing they’re trained for all he has in store! I like how you included Women’s rights and mentioned Woodrow Wilson.
Phew, I’m glad they’re reunited and that her brother didn’t die.
Brianna has to go undercover as a princess betrothed to Noah. Interesting incorportation of gender here.
Sometimes when the characters spoke, their faces would go off the screen. I recommend to have the zoom follow them as they speak.
Brianna bouncing on a bed is so me XD
I didn’t customize Noah, he’s already so gorgeous. Slight problem, when Noah leaves the room it looks like he’s getting shorter.
Thomas is homosexual and that is something frowned upon by people in that time period there as well as being a woman. It must be so terrifying to have to live in fear.
In the closet, the pink dress glitches and appears all over the closet a few times at random for like a second.
I loved the tappable choices you had-choosing between the dresses and reading Nancy’s note.
It’s OK Brianna, I don’t like dresses either XD
Nancy has 13 brothers?! But I believe it was normal then. Poor Nancy, they never listen to her and her being a woman affects her. On a side note, pants are awesome!!!
When King George asks “What is the woman’s name again?” the speechbubble leans slightly to Noah. Also, I love how you used a text effect for this.
I loved the timed choices of the fight-I defeated all of King George’s best men. Go me!
Side note, Thomas looks really big in comparison to Brianna as they face King George when he congratulates them on defeating the men without getting hit once.
I see you ended at the customization of Rose, the girl who comes running in and crashes into Brianna.
The backgrounds were for the most part from Episode but overall I enjoyed, it was well written with very few errors, interesting characters (Brianna’s my fav) and super cool dialogue! Amazing job <3
P.S Please note, this review is not meant to offend but to help you improve. I’m not a professional reviewer although I try my best and put my heart and soul into my reviews. Anyways, have a lovely day! 
