Try,
And, maybe remove this since it seems unnecessary.
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#Instead of this, remove it, and then you can write:
@SARAH spot 2.400 -100 -520 AND SARAH faces right
@SARAH walks to spot 2.400 170 -520 AND SARAH does it while walk_neutral_loop THEN SARAH starts idle
#Much smoother 
Thank you so much!
I did a mixture of the two, since for some reason my script didn’t like the direction. Thank you so much!
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Wait, so if the preview on mobile doesn’t follow the preview on pc, is it a glitch or is there something wrong with my code? Just clarifying.
The web previewer and app have been known to show different things which is quite frustrating. Discussions on it: Difference between live previewer and app & Dont You Hate It When It Happens
Words of advice:
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Trust what it shows on the app (what the readers see) rather than the web previewer. Adjust your script accordingly. Hope this helps
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No problem 
Thank you!
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You can’t use the follow command with spot direction/directing.
So,
&pan to zone 1 in 1.5
@SIAN walks to spot 0.920 138 127 in zone 1 in 1.5 AND SIAN does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
More info here: HOW TO: Stage Direction
Okay thank you 
I really need help, I got my characters in spots then them moving to different spots but when i preview it they are moving in different directions and different sides of the screen
#Try:
INT. ORANGE HALLWAY - DAY
#beat starts
&cut to zone 1
&SIAN spot 0.876 367 153 in zone 1 AND SIAN faces left
&JAX spot 0.766 10 250 in zone 1 AND JAX faces right
@SIAN changes into SIAN_2
@transition fade in black 1
@pause for 0.7
&JAX walks to spot 0.928 79 159 in zone 1 in 1.5 AND JAX does it while walk_talk_phone_neutral_loop
@SIAN walks to spot 0.876 142 159 in zone 1 in 1.5 AND SIAN does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
#also you don’t need lines 88-93
#when you write a new background, a new scene starts. Meaning you need to place them into the scene using spot direction. And then have them walk towards the destination you desire. I can’t test anything out but this is my recommendation to you. Do let me know how it goes.
Thank you it worked 
Made a post on my Instagram that I’d like to share on my help thread:
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Tip: from the episode guides No one judge me on the time please 
Edit: Another tip:
Have a nice day/night
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I wanted to share this on my help thread, also
Limelight Lip Color template I’ve been working on for epyxmagic:
The post on epyxmagic:
Have a good day/night where you’re at
Special thanks to @FlowerGriefer for the art materials and thank you to @fraud for recording the video 
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Hey, @JemU776, can I get some help? I get the error ‘Unexpected: ELSE: else’ and it completely skips the if and else parts.
Script
NARR (SKY)
Quick choose her name!
Only one will get her completely off the hook!
choice [timed]
“Cindy Terretz” {
ALEX (talk_awkward)
My name is Cindy Terretz.
ALEX (talk_arms_crossed)
My father was Italian and my mom Latina.
ALEX (idle_awkward)
(That’s not the most solid reassurance that I’m legal but let’s hope it’s enough.)
gain cindy_terretz
} “Veronica Sanchez” {
ALEX (talk_awkward)
My name is Veronica Sanchez.
ALEX (talk_arms_crossed)
My mother was American and my father Spanish.
ALEX (idle_awkward)
(I have to make sure these cops know I’m legal or I could get in trouble.)
gain veronica_sanchez
} “Sophia Garcia” {
ALEX (talk_awkward)
My name is Sophia Garcia.
ALEX (talk_arms_crossed)
Both of my parents are Spanish, but I was born in the U.S.
ALEX (eyeroll_subtle)
(I have to make sure that these cops know I’m legal.)
gain sophia_garcia
} “Maya Santos” {
ALEX (talk_awkward)
My name is Maya Santos.
ALEX (talk_arms_crossed)
Both of my parents were spanish and I was born in Mexico but I have a green card.
ALEX (eyeroll_subtle)
(I have to make sure these cops know I’m legal.)
gain maya_santos
}
@cut to zone 2 and zoom on 533 266 to 433% in 0
RENAJAE (think)
(Hmmm…)
if (“cindy_terretz”) {
else {
readerMessage I’m sorry, but you’re not completely off the hook, please answer the following questions!
RENAJAE (talk_think)
What law firm do you work at?
choice
“Sky & M” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_arms_crossed)
I work at Sky&M law firm.
@cut to zone 2 and zoom on 533 266 to 433% in 0
RENAJAE (talk_arms_crossed)
I know that law firm.
RENAJAE (talk_think)
I think my cousin is applying for a job there.
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_afraid)
(Hurry, I need an excuse for why her cousin won’t see me there!)
} “Some legal law firm that you can’t remember the name of even though you work there” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_unsure)
I can’t remember the name.
ALEX (deepbreath)
It must be all the shock from this experience.
@cut to zone 2 and zoom on 533 266 to 433% in 0
RENAJAE (talk_think)
That’s odd.
RENAJAE (talk_think)
What case are you working on?
choice
“SkyM is suing Ria for calling her Cow Boi” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_awkward)
SkyM is suing Ria for calling her Cow Boi.
@cut to zone 2 and zoom on 533 266 to 433% in 0
RENAJAE (talk_arms_crossed)
I know that case.
RENAJAE (talk_sad_timid)
Poor SkyM.
} “Ria is suing SkyM for not being a cowboy” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_awkward)
Ria is suing SkyM for not being a cowboy.
@cut to zone 2 and zoom on 533 266 to 433% in 0
RENAJAE (talk_think)
I don’t remember that case.
RENAJAE (talk_shrug)
Oh well-
RENAJAE (talk_sad_timid)
Poor Sky.
}}}} elif(“sophia_garcia”) {
else (“maya_santos”) {
readerMessage Congrats! The officers believe your story and you don’t have to answer any extra questions!
@cut to zone 2 and zoom on 533 266 to 433% in 0
RENAJAE (talk_think)
Okay.
}}
label off_the_hook_or_no
@RENAJAE is write_notepad
readerMessage Only one will get you off the hook!!
RENAJAE (talk_think)
What alley were you in when Jesse was shot?
choice [timed]
“The one by Daniels on fourth street” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_arms_crossed)
The one by Daniels on fourth street.
@cut to zone 2 and zoom on 533 266 to 433% in 0
RENAJAE (talk_arms_crossed)
Great, we’ll send more officers there now!
@RENAJAE is write_notepad
} “The one by main street, behind the club Diamonds” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_unsure)
The one by main street, behind the club.
NARR (SKY)
You have failed, please go back and click the correct choice!
choice
“Go back!” {
goto off_the_hook_or_no
}}
label try_again
RENAJAE (talk_think)
While hiding did the shooter notice you in any way?
choice [timed]
“No, the shooter kept their focus on Jesse” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_arms_crossed)
The shooter did not.
ALEX (talk_sad_clutch)
They shot Jesse and ran.
} “Yes, the shoot shot towards my foot before running away” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_awkward)
Yes, the shooter shot toward my foot before running away.
ALEX (talk_awkward)
Part of my heel was poking out.
NARR (SKY)
This isn’t apart of your original story.
You were caught and sentenced to jail, try again.
goto try_again
}
@cut to zone 2 and zoom on 533 266 to 433% in 0
@RENAJAE is write_notepad
label renajaes_trust
RENAJAE (talk_arms_crossed)
You said you called your wife first-
RENAJAE (talk_think)
Why would you do that?
choice [timed]
“Because I trust her more than anyone” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_arms_crossed)
I trust her more than anything and I her name was the first to pop into my head.
gain little_untrust
NARR (SKY)
Narrow fly by, but you lost some of Renajae’s trust.
} “I was panicking and needed someone to calm me down” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_sad_timid)
I was panicking and needed someone to calm me down.
ALEX (talk_sad_clutch)
She is the only one who can calm me down.
} “I didn’t know what to do in the moment so I acted inpulsively” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_awkward)
I didn’t know what to do in the moment and acted impulsively.
NARR (SKY)
You have lost all of Renajae’s trust, try again.
goto renajaes_trust
}
@cut to zone 2 and zoom on 533 266 to 433% in 0
@RENAJAE is write_notepad
label nobody_else
RENAJAE (talk_think)
Did you notice anyone close to where Jesse was shot?
choice [timed]
“Nope, they were all by the apartments on Danel’s street” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_arms_crossed)
Nope.
ALEX (talk_sad_timid)
Everybody were in their apartments.
} “Yes, a drug dealer” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_awkward)
I saw a drug dealer around.
NARR (SKY)
This answer’s a flop!
goto nobody_else
}
@cut to zone 2 and zoom on 533 266 to 433% in 0
@RENAJAE is write_notepad
label start_over_hehe
RENAJAE (talk_think)
Do you know the Martinezs personally?
choice [timed]
“No” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_arms_crossed)
No, I do not.
} “Yes” {
@cut to zone 3 and zoom on 648 228 to 200% in 0
ALEX (talk_arms_crossed)
Yes, I do.
NARR (SKY)
I luv making people start over, though I personally hate it.
goto start_over_hehe
}
- Missing a } in front of else. Don’t put " " around the gain name
else needs to be by itself. No quotations around your gain names.
Glancing over your template, I see a few other issues. Can you PM me thanks?
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Bump! Bookmarking!
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