I just published my first complete story.
I would love feedback on it as I’m not sure if I should to take the plot any further.
Also feel free to share your stories I’d love to read them it’d be nice to make this a forum where anyone can promote/ review other’s work (no pressure though of course, sometimes R4Rs can be stressfull!)
NAME: Hotel Moreno
PLOT: undercover agent Marco is sent to the Moreno Hotel to try and uncover there secrets. What and who he finds thre will change his life forever.
There are multiple routes (both romantic and non-romantic) and I worked really hard to make sure that the choices really matter!
Here’s the cover:
Thank you to anyone who checks it out!
Disclaimer - I may not be able to read everyone’s story (tickets and time), but if you check out my other thread, i’m designing covers for people; so you may be able to get one of those!