And oh no, James was better written than Jason. Only because unlike you, I didn’t really emphasize the “cycle of abuse” part that James was guilty of (insult, sweet talk, manipulate, rinse and repeat).
For Ruben, I figured adding a few scenes to showcase his orientation would be harmless, as well as make fun of stereotypes revolving around bisexual people.
So far I’m at the part where I see Connor. I’m especially excited to see the snack with the buzz cut in your cover lol
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omg you’re too kind, i think my sense of humor is so… ??? i’m glad you liked it lmao!!!
AND JESUS NO they only have to repeat the chapter, not the whole entire story. That’s why at the beginning of most of mine, I ask if you’ve already read the chapter so you can skip it if you have, and read it if you haven’t. That gives me the freedom to edit anything I might need to, and the reader the option to continue where they left off!
Same, same. He’s a snack alright… just wait and see
What?! That’s absolutely bullshit! Now I’m panicking because I did proofread and fix some chapters (that I somehow failed to do all these months before publishing) before too.
I was gonna ask if it’s not too much trouble, how far you’re in my story? That way I can check if anything is going wrong, mostly around chapter 5 where I added a bonus scene with Ruben. Christ, that’s annoying af to hear though, didn’t even have an inkling
Now I get why people will sometimes lock the said chapter or ask for the repeats. At first I was confused at yours because I did a replay (cuz i loved it) and missed a chapter and ended up getting a chapter ahead or something.
Goddammit Episode. Now I wonder why my reads (15 tho isn’t a lot) weren’t increasing since 2 weeks. Probably because any current readers could’ve been fed up. Then again I’m just overthinking things still annoying tho.
Makes me wanna be absolutely sure now before releasing episodes after 10, which is season 1 ending for TotH