heyy, so i’ve read your story and i’d like do give you a short feedback
positive;
_nice backgrounds/overlays
_beautiful cover
_good dialogues; way of speaking matches with each characters personality, ++humourous and diverse
things you can work on;
_add periods (.) after each sentence
_the pauses between narrators were too long. yk when tiping to read the next text, i had to wait a few seconds. (but not always tho)
otherwise, everything’s fine. keep up the good work! 
