Just released my first 3 episodes

#1

Would love some feedback and any hints and tips on what I can do to improve/make better?

First time writing a story so please be honest but gentle :slight_smile:

#2

is it INK ore LIMELIGHT

#3

i will read it :slight_smile: please can you also read mine

#4

It’s Ink :slight_smile:

#5

Yes of course! :slight_smile:

#6

ok

#7

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read it :slight_smile: great story i have followed you on instagram to :slight_smile:

#8

thank you!

I’m reading your other ones now - have read the first episode so far. its good! :slight_smile:

#9

I am new author as well :smile:

Are you interested in r4r?

You, Me And The Beat by Anna

link:

#10

Yeah I’ll do a r4r

:blush:

#11

Hey, we could do a review for review if you want :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :slight_smile:

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736

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