Would love some feedback and any hints and tips on what I can do to improve/make better?
First time writing a story so please be honest but gentle
Would love some feedback and any hints and tips on what I can do to improve/make better?
First time writing a story so please be honest but gentle
is it INK ore LIMELIGHT
i will read it please can you also read mine
It’s Ink
Yes of course!
ok
thank you!
I’m reading your other ones now - have read the first episode so far. its good!
I am new author as well
Are you interested in r4r?
You, Me And The Beat by Anna
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Yeah I’ll do a r4r
Hey, we could do a review for review if you want
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Here is the description of my story
Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy
Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736