Just Reviewing Stories!

I can’t find anything to read atm so I thought I’d try and find a story to read and review whilst at it. If you want a review just tell me what your story is called and I’ll give you something good about your story and something that needs improvement (if there is anything! :joy:) If it’s my type of book I’ll probably continue reading :slight_smile:

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I’d love a review.

Oblivious
8 episodes so far
Comedy
When socially awkward Leanna catches the eye of equally awkward Kai things can’t get more awkward, can they?
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I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Style: Ink
This story has 4 episodes
Cover:

HERE’S THE LINK!

Here’s mine:
Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Episodes: 16 (more coming soon)
Instagram: dreamer.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5452320906543104

I really enjoyed the first chapter of your story! You did a good job and I wish I could write that well :slight_smile: Here’s what I thought after the first chapter:
The length was really good and the humour was very good :laughing: I related to Abby which might be worrying.
I had a difficult time thinking of improvement but you could maybe put in more choices.
Job well done! Xx

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Here’s my story. If you can get to it, let me know what to improve on :+1:t6:

Title: Razors

Description: You find yourself trapped on an alien planet. Can you find a way home?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4701063970095104

I’ll try and read it ASAP but it might take a few hours as my phone is dying sigh xx

No worries :slight_smile:

Hey you can do a review of mine, I don’t mind.
Title: Persistent
Genre: Romance but is also drama I guess.
Author: Lils
Style: Ink
Description: Becoming friends again, easy for Marina and Malachi. Falling in love, once again easy for the two.But maintaining a relationship? Not so easy.

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4813892265836544

Cover:

Thank you!!

Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique

Title: Ocean’s 5
Author: Lara P.
Genre: Action
Chapters: 3 out (more coming soon)
Style: Ink
Description: Five highly skilled and most dangerous people on Earth are brought together for the biggest heist ever seen. What can go wrong?
Instagram: @larapstories
Link: https://episode.app.link/mRmxbzLPYR

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I would love to have you review my story before it releases! Do you do non published stories

Would love your feedback :two_hearts:

I would but I really don’t know how that works. You’d probably have to guide me through it :joy: xx

@blissfulfromeveythin just needs to send you a link to the story. Except it’s unpublished . You won’t be able to favorite it and can only access it with the link. My friend and me would send drafts of our stuff to each other all the time. Extremely useful to me since I wanted her opinion on something major I put in my story.

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http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5153847975477248 Here is my new story, I’d love a review! Thank you for making this thread.

Title: The Teenage Vigilante
Author: Lexi Mae
Genre: Action
Chapters: 3 (more coming)
Style: Ink
Description: Follow Vanessa Black, a normal 17 year old girl by day and the town’s vigilante by night. What happens when she meets 3 people just like her?

Story: I Love You to Death
Author: Kiki K.
Genre: Romance/Drama
Plot: Their friendships have kept them together since birth, but what happens when love and tragedy tries to split them apart?
Style: Limelight
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id love a review!

Title: Blades of Desire

Author: Giselle C.

Genre: Mystery

Style: LL

Small cover:

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Large cover:

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Description:

A rose, caught in the fire. Will you let that fire burn you to ashes, or will you fight to put it out? The choice is yours. |CC, CM, LGBTQ option|

IG; gisellepisode :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

That is a big help! Thank you!

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