Kai’s Reviews! [Open]


#21

I didn’t publish my story but I need a review before I publish it, so can I request a review for my unpublished story here? (it only has 2 episodes btw)

Title: Aching for the bad girl
Genre: romance/ comedy
What would I like to be reviewed: Is the humor on point? Is the character development okay? Is the Directing okay?
What I think the best part of my work was: Since my first story is serious and emotional, I worked hard to create a humor in my new story. So I thought my best work of this story was humor.
My strongest point in creating a story in Episode: Making people laugh. I believe that people should be happy when reading my story.
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link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6183635604340736


#22

Hey! Thanks for creating this thread!
Story title: Let the demon inside
Author: Nierido
Genre: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Number of episodes:5
Story style: Limelight
Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504
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#23

Hi Kai,

Still doing story reviews? If so, I ask that you please check out my new story, “Our Galaxies Intertwined!”

Title: Our Galaxies Intertwined

Genre: Fantasy

Description: When danger comes to Earth in the form of a sexy alien, intrigue and drama follow when he falls for shy girl, Genevieve.

What you would like reviewed: Everything. I would like good feedback in order to improve.

What you think the best part of your work was: I think the best part of my work is the writing. I try to be very detailed and descriptive with the characters’ thoughts and sentences.

Your strongest point in creating a story on Episode:

Cover: More than one

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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5776939295834112


#24