Keeping the reader immersed

I saw a post on instagram recently that had tips on how to keep the writer immersed in an interactive story, e.g. not writing ‘you see a key on the table’ but just describing it as 'there’s an old key…" (at least I think that’s what it said - this is why I need it!). Stupidly I didn’t save it and I can’t find it on my feed. Did anyone else see it, or can you just give me some general tips on how to do this?


I’m not quite sure about what you mean but if you want some tips you can check my thread :heart:


i haven’t seen it, but there are other great tips out there for things abt that ! :))

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Thanks noyaan, not exactly what I was after but I’ll definitely use this! :grinning:

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I’ll have a look, thanks

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