Keeping the reader immersed

[javajure]

I saw a post on instagram recently that had tips on how to keep the writer immersed in an interactive story, e.g. not writing ‘you see a key on the table’ but just describing it as 'there’s an old key…" (at least I think that’s what it said - this is why I need it!). Stupidly I didn’t save it and I can’t find it on my feed. Did anyone else see it, or can you just give me some general tips on how to do this?

[noyaan]

I’m not quite sure about what you mean but if you want some tips you can check my thread

[syddstories]

i haven’t seen it, but there are other great tips out there for things abt that ! :))

[javajure]

Thanks noyaan, not exactly what I was after but I’ll definitely use this!

[javajure]

I’ll have a look, thanks