I really want my readers to choose the premium option and or the regular option but when I do the label thing it makes the MC go back to the school scene. Here is my script
label dressing_game
NARRATOR (GISELLE)
So for today, what should I wear?
choice “Smashing Denim”{
@GISELLE changes into SMASHIND
@GISELLE is primp_neutral
NARRATOR
Should I wear this?
choice
“Yes”{
goto new_school_hot
}
“No”{
goto dressing_game
}
}
“Casual Black”{
@GISELLE changes into SHIT
@GISELLE is idle_awkward_scratch_loop
NARRATOR
Should I wear this?
choice
“Yes”{
goto new_school_yuck
}
“No”{
goto dressing_game
}
}
label new_school_hot
@GISELLE exits left
EXT. HIGH SCHOOL EXTERIOR - DAY
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@transition fade out white
EXT. CAMPUS ENTRANCE - DAY
music ext_campus_day_busy
volume music 100 4000
@speechbubble reset
@zoom reset
@cut to zone 3
&GISELLE spot 0.668 284 230 AND GISELLE faces right
&ABBEY spot 0.489 -244 404 in zone 3 AND ABIGAIL spot 0.356 35 463 in zone 3 AND AUSTIN spot 0.521 -492 378 in zone 3 AND AERONICA spot 0.347 -115 482 in zone 3
&ABBEY faces right AND ABIGAIL faces right
&MATTHEW spot 0.467 -554 402 in zone 3 AND ANNIE spot 0.323 -39 502 in zone 3 AND EVIANNA spot 0.371 -78 478 in zone 3 AND ARYA spot 0.498 -284 399 in zone 3
&PERSEPHONE spot 0.471 -328 405 in zone 3 AND PARIS spot 0.455 -200 415 in zone 3 AND JIMMY spot 0.815 -396 160 in zone 3 AND DRE spot 0.860 -320 137 in zone 3
&PERSEPHONE faces right AND PARIS faces right AND JIMMY faces right AND AUSTIN faces right AND AERONICA faces right AND DRE faces right AND MATTHEW faces right AND ABIGAIL faces right
GISELLE (talk_agree_happy)
Bye, thank you!
@pause for 0.5
@GISELLE is deepbreath AND GISELLE faces left AND ABIGAIL is react_startled_embarrassed
@pause for a beat
&ABIGAIL is talk_accuse_angry
@GISELLE walks to spot 0.416 137 397 in 5
&pan to zone 1 in 12
&MATTHEW is talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop then MATTHEW is think_rubchin then MATTHEW is react_shocked_gasp then MATTHEW is talk_unsure
&ABBEY is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
&PARIS is talk_agree_happy
@GISELLE walks to spot 0.470 220 401 in zone 1 in 12
&zoom on 234 425 to 260% in 6
@GISELLE walks to spot 0.290 198 556 in 4 then GISELLE is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear
@GISELLE is talk_neutral_loop_rear
volume music 0 6000
@pause for a beat
@remove GISELLE
@pause for a beat
@zoom reset
@transition fade out white
INT. CLASSROOM DESK - DAY
@GISELLE spot 1.280 269 -29 in zone 1 AND GISELLE is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@GISELLE is yawn_bored
@GISELLE is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
NARRATOR (GISELLE)
English. I simply hated it, in Math there’s only one answer but English there’s multiple. All about deep thinking and symbolism.
NARRATOR (GISELLE)
Talking and watching epic romance stories just to dig out the symbols in the movie
@GISELLE is eyeroll_sarcastic
NARRATOR (GISELLE)
There is no way one shy maiden could get the King of the country and poor hot boy to fall in love with her. And with all the choices she still chooses the wrong one.
@GISELLE is yawn_bored
@GISELLE is sleep_sit_neutral_loop
@OSCAR spot 0.791 -31 41 in zone 1
@MRS APPLE spot 1.250 205 -319 in zone 1
MRS APPLE
Mr. Bell, late again.
OSCAR
Sorry, maam my bike broke down.
MRS APPLE
No more excuses, but you're a good student so I'll let it slide.
OSCAR
Thank you.
MRS APPLE
Sit beside the new student who seems to be distracted.
@OSCAR walks to spot 1.124 66 65 in zone 1 AND OSCAR faces right
@OSCAR is laugh_chuckle
OSCAR (talk_whisper_unsure)
New student, wake up!
@GISELLE is standup_neutral
@GISELLE spot 1.280 269 -29 in zone 1
@GISELLE faces left
@GISELLE is talk_sheepish_rubneck
GISELLE (talk_agree_happy)
Well, hello.
OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Hello, I'm Oscar and you're sleepy new girl.
@GISELLE faces left
GISELLE (talk_agree_happy)
Oh, sorry I had sleep it just wasn’t enough. I’m [NAME]
OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Nice to meet you [NAME]
MRS APPLE
Hello! back there new girl tell me this. What is the name of the author who wrote Hamlet.
choice
“William Shakespeare”{
MRS APPLE
Wow! That’s correct.
OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Wow, but it was a simple question anyway.
@GISELLE is laugh_giggle
GISELLE (talk_sarcastic)
I still got it right didn’t I.
@OSCAR is laugh_crackup
@transition fade out white
}
“Jesy Shakespeare”{
@OSCAR is laugh_chuckle
NARRATOR
Incorrect. I suggest you catch up you came really late. Oscar right there is a top A+ student. I know he’ll help you.
OSCAR (talk_flirt_charming)
You seem unteachable.
GISELLE (talk_unsure)
I am teachable, kind of.
@OSCAR is laugh_crackup AND GISELLE is laugh_chuckle
@transition fade out white
}
label new_school_yuck
EXT. CAMPUS ENTRANCE - DAY
music ext_campus_day_busy
volume music 100 4000
@speechbubble reset
@zoom reset
@cut to zone 3
&GISELLE spot 0.668 284 230 AND GISELLE faces right
&ABBEY spot 0.489 -244 404 in zone 3 AND ABIGAIL spot 0.356 35 463 in zone 3 AND AUSTIN spot 0.521 -492 378 in zone 3 AND AERONICA spot 0.347 -115 482 in zone 3
&ABBEY faces right AND ABIGAIL faces right
&MATTHEW spot 0.467 -554 402 in zone 3 AND ANNIE spot 0.323 -39 502 in zone 3 AND EVIANNA spot 0.371 -78 478 in zone 3 AND ARYA spot 0.498 -284 399 in zone 3
&PERSEPHONE spot 0.471 -328 405 in zone 3 AND PARIS spot 0.455 -200 415 in zone 3 AND JIMMY spot 0.815 -396 160 in zone 3 AND DRE spot 0.860 -320 137 in zone 3
&PERSEPHONE faces right AND PARIS faces right AND JIMMY faces right AND AUSTIN faces right AND AERONICA faces right AND DRE faces right AND MATTHEW faces right AND ABIGAIL faces right
GISELLE (talk_agree_happy)
Bye, thank you!
@pause for 0.5
@GISELLE is deepbreath AND GISELLE faces left AND ABIGAIL is react_startled_embarrassed
@pause for a beat
&ABIGAIL is talk_accuse_angry
@GISELLE walks to spot 0.416 137 397 in 5
&pan to zone 1 in 12
&MATTHEW is talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop then MATTHEW is think_rubchin then MATTHEW is react_shocked_gasp then MATTHEW is talk_unsure
&ABBEY is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
&PARIS is talk_agree_happy
@GISELLE walks to spot 0.470 220 401 in zone 1 in 12
&zoom on 234 425 to 260% in 6
@GISELLE walks to spot 0.290 198 556 in 4 then GISELLE is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear
@GISELLE is talk_neutral_loop_rear
volume music 0 6000
@pause for a beat
@remove GISELLE
@pause for a beat
@zoom reset
@transition fade out white
INT. CLASSROOM DESK - DAY
@GISELLE spot 1.280 269 -29 in zone 1 AND GISELLE is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@GISELLE is yawn_bored
@GISELLE is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
NARRATOR (GISELLE)
English. I simply hated it, in Math there’s only one answer but English there’s multiple. All about deep thinking and symbolism.
NARRATOR (GISELLE)
Talking and watching epic romance stories just to dig out the symbols in the movie
@GISELLE is eyeroll_sarcastic
NARRATOR (GISELLE)
There is no way one shy maiden could get the King of the country and poor hot boy to fall in love with her. And with all the choices she still chooses the wrong one.
@GISELLE is yawn_bored
@GISELLE is sleep_sit_neutral_loop
@OSCAR spot 0.791 -31 41 in zone 1
@MRS APPLE spot 1.250 205 -319 in zone 1
MRS APPLE
Mr. Bell, late again.
OSCAR
Sorry, madam my bike broke down.
MRS APPLE
No more excuses, but you're a good student so I'll let it slide.
OSCAR
Thank you.
MRS APPLE
Sit beside the new student who seems to be distracted.
@OSCAR walks to spot 1.124 66 65 in zone 1 AND OSCAR faces right
@OSCAR is laugh_chuckle
OSCAR (talk_whisper_unsure)
New student, wake up!
@GISELLE is standup_neutral
@GISELLE spot 1.280 269 -29 in zone 1
@GISELLE faces left
@GISELLE is talk_sheepish_rubneck
GISELLE (talk_agree_happy)
Well, hello.
OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Hello, I'm Oscar and you're sleepy new girl.
@GISELLE faces left
GISELLE (talk_agree_happy)
Oh, sorry I had sleep it just wasn’t enough. I’m [NAME]
OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Nice to meet you [NAME]
MRS APPLE
Hello! back there new girl tell me this. What is the name of the author who wrote Hamlet.
choice
“William Shakespeare”{
MRS APPLE
Wow! That’s correct.
OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Wow, but it was a simple question anyway.
@GISELLE is laugh_giggle
GISELLE (talk_sarcastic)
I still got it right didn’t I.
@OSCAR is laugh_crackup
@transition fade out white
}
“Jesy Shakespeare”{
@OSCAR is laugh_chuckle
NARRATOR
Incorrect. I suggest you catch up you came really late. Oscar right there is a top A+ student. I know he’ll help you.
OSCAR (talk_flirt_charming)
You seem unteachable.
GISELLE (talk_unsure)
I am teachable, kind of.
@OSCAR is laugh_crackup AND GISELLE is laugh_chuckle
@transition fade out white
}