Thank you so much! I appreciate your feedback so much it means the world. I’m sorry I took a little longer because my brothers wanted to review my story in front of me lol. ANYWAYS I just have to say that I absolutely love your story! The filter, the plot, the characters!
Quinn’s hesitating nature towards finding love at first I had me so intrigued cuz now I want to know why so bad! And Astrea is a sweetheart I love her. The background and history of Quinn and her family are so established, it’s like their real people (idk if I’m making any sense lol I just mean that I can see you really planned this and thought about the characters’ traits and backgrounds thoroughly). I’m just noticing how important Quinn holds the feeling of feeling safe and I’m wondering what has caused her to feel so closed in a shell. Her having slowly opened up to Astrea was really refreshing.
This story is so cute, Quinn and Astrea’s energy are amazing. Astrea’s confidence really complements Quinn’s adorable awkwardness lol. The ending of episode 1 really caught me by surprise lol. I was confused as to what happened but the hologram thing was an amazing idea! Better than mine tbh cuz they actually get to sit together and nice job with the interactivity!
This war has me on edge. I’m really wondering what this would mean between Earth and Galactia, and if Quinn and Astrea’s communication will be effected because of what might happen to Earth’s access to the Intercom. BUT OMG THIS REALLY HAS ME WONDERING. I hope Quinn and Astrea will still be okay and in touch.
I have to say you’re very considerate for the sound notifs for the hearing impaired. That was a very sweet touch.
I could definitely see how much work you put in with all the overlays. If this doesn’t pay off with you being one of the winners, I’d be very shocked.
I’m sorry this was a lot lol but all in all, I would continue reading your story because the plot and visuals are amazinnggg.