Left BreathLess


#1

I posted my first story , I would love some reviews.


Left beathLess
Written by Lizzie C


Reviews on my first story
#2

Hello, I launched my first story (3 episodes so far) and I was wondering if anyone could review it and give me feedback .
My story name :Left BreathLess
Author: Lizzie C.


#3

Hello, I would love to read it! I will definitely let you know when I am done!


#4

Awesome thank you


#5

I would love a review also
PLEASE READ

Name: Don’t Kiss Him
By: Nakinaki
ALL FEEDBACK IS WELCOME

Joey has fallen in love with her best friends brother. The one guy she promised never to touch. When Joey tries to move on with a famous chef a group of fans try and ruin her life.

http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6018754343206912


#6

I really like your story! I think people would definitely read this! And as of right now I don’t see any problems with it!


#7

Really ! Awesome thank you so much . I will have chap 4 by Friday .


#8

Cool I’m excited to read it!


#9

Chapter 4 is complete
Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4601007371059200
Title: Left BreathLess
Author: Lizzie C
Chapters:4
Description: Bria wants her fairytale man. What happens when the fairytale man is the mafia leader? Will Bria be happy?Will anxiety win?or the mafia takeover her soul?
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