I posted my first story , I would love some reviews.
Left beathLess
Written by Lizzie C
Hello, I launched my first story (3 episodes so far) and I was wondering if anyone could review it and give me feedback .
My story name :Left BreathLess
Author: Lizzie C.
Hello, I would love to read it! I will definitely let you know when I am done!
Awesome thank you
I would love a review also
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Joey has fallen in love with her best friends brother. The one guy she promised never to touch. When Joey tries to move on with a famous chef a group of fans try and ruin her life.
I really like your story! I think people would definitely read this! And as of right now I don’t see any problems with it!
Really ! Awesome thank you so much . I will have chap 4 by Friday .
Cool I’m excited to read it!
Chapter 4 is complete
Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4601007371059200
Title: Left BreathLess
Author: Lizzie C
Chapters:4
Description: Bria wants her fairytale man. What happens when the fairytale man is the mafia leader? Will Bria be happy?Will anxiety win?or the mafia takeover her soul?
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